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My imas poems
Scotty:
Much better.
RoninatorMarx:
I see you tried something new. Since you decided to take on a more common form of poetry, may I suggest that you try following meters, etc(?).
This is just me, but I think you should stick to free verse. ;)
(Sorry, not much time in writing this. Will get back here tomorrow)
Sev:
i like both forms.
though rhymes break the norm
nice work blake.
blake307:
Ryo and Yumeko, a perfect pairing who was made for each other
Like a couple of lovers they are they cling on to one another.
With Ryo’s kindness and Yumeko’s friendliness,
They hug each other with pure tenderness.
Even with Ryo as a cross dresser,
Yumeko still sees him as considerate and appealing.
When Ryo reveals his manliness on stage.
Yumeko can’t help but fall in love with him as her heart rapidly pounds in a rage.
When they are together,
They realize their love for each other is invincible and will live on forever.
blake307:
This poem is dedicated to Eri-Nyan's birthday. Enjoy.
As I march on to the outside world,
I say goodbye to the net world and say hello to the real world.
Ahh, the sun is so shiny and bright,
There is nothing in the world more fascinating than this delightful daylight.
The sight of cats in the park,
It brings me warmth in my heart.
As I walk down towards 876 productions in a crossword pathway,
I excitedly march on as I think about what surprises await me today.
As I arrive,
Ai-chan, Ryo-san and Ozaki-san hollar, Surprise!
As I stare at their smiling faces,
I am filled with happiness knowing I have the gift of wonderful friends in this wonderful place.
As we all party on this day,
Those fun times and many others will never fade away on my special birthday.
I am Eri Mizutani, and today will live on in my memory forever as long as I live.
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