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Urby's Multimedia Thread (image heavy!)
Yui:
Wow...
I like your works. At least, I saw every drawings and 4-koma, and I like that. Good job!^^
Urby:
Part 4 of Uncertain Future...you 961 boys out there might like where (you think) this is going.
Due to the pacing gaffe mentioned earlier, every part's events from here on will be bumped to the next one. Unless something else comes up, the "mature" parts will be 6 and 8 now.
Don't forget to leave a comment if you read.
Picup:
awe, i was waiting for hibiki to show up.
just stuck my thoughts under spoilers so I don't spoil anyone on this chapter [: Poor Chihaya, I feel so sorry that she got cheated out of the competition. I'm actually curious on if Haruka really did win by a hair or not -- although we know it's Kuroi's smooth talking way.
On technical terms with the chapter, I spotted a typo: "what she needed was a chance of pace" I believe it should be 'change'. There's a couple of lines that I felt didn't flow, and one that was pretty wordy as well.
Keep it trekkin' Urby, since I know this is just the beginning of this giant piece.
Urby:
Hibiki is a comin', I promise! She will be in the next part being way too cute for her own good.
Typo fixed along with some minor word/positioning edits.
Haldo:
--- Quote from: Urby on November 15, 2010, 04:09:14 am ---Hibiki is a comin', I promise! She will be in the next part being way too cute for her own good.
--- End quote ---
Yaaay!
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