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Urby:
I'm pretty sure this story will get a lot of "whoa, didn't see that one coming!" from people. Hopefully it will continue to be cool developments!
You implyin' I don't know what I'm doing, Himoto? RAAAAAGE.
spoilers for part 3: Miki shaves her head!! no she doesn't.
Also, I figure I should mention this before things get too serious: Uncertain Future will be dealing with some mature themes in later parts. Just a heads up, though it probably won't be an issue until part 5 and part 7. (if things go as planned...)
ON A LESS SERIOUS NOTE: UF will at some points split off into other stories that explore another character's perspective. These stories will run parallel to UF and will explore and explain events that Miki won't be present for. Basically they are all the same continuity and the same overall story but different things happen!
The two that will for sure be written are Moment of Eye Contact for Chihaya, and Thank You for the Memories for Yukiho. I am consiiiiidering one for Makoto (concerning the conversation she has with Azusa in part 2) but I have yet to have a title for that one. "the agent comes at night" would be entirely inappropriate though it would be pretty funny.
And yes, in case you haven't figured it out already, the titles are intentional references to in-game songs.
Sev:
Good God. All i can say is you need to be published. Nice Work. if you ever do get published be sure to send us free copies XD
Urby:
OKAY SO I GOT DREAMIN' CRITIQUED BY MY CLASS
A couple of things mentioned I am not going to even consider because they would wreck the story, but pretty much everyone mentioned that they would like to see more detail - setting detail, character detail, things like that.
My question is, is this a problem the rest of you have? The class did not have the luxury of knowing the game this story comes from, but I do know that I am pretty sparse on detail. Would you like or mind more? tbh I have no idea how to address this problem right now; I'm trying to figure out how much I should add. This will also help in future pieces like UF and all of its child stories.
Gonna try getting Uncertain Future part 3 done this week, or started at least. I have some major projects coming up and I have yet to get started on them (...) so I might skip it this week and the next.
Haldo:
--- Quote from: Urby on October 18, 2010, 01:02:41 pm ---OKAY SO I GOT DREAMIN' CRITIQUED BY MY CLASS
A couple of things mentioned I am not going to even consider because they would wreck the story, but pretty much everyone mentioned that they would like to see more detail - setting detail, character detail, things like that.
My question is, is this a problem the rest of you have? The class did not have the luxury of knowing the game this story comes from, but I do know that I am pretty sparse on detail. Would you like or mind more? tbh I have no idea how to address this problem right now; I'm trying to figure out how much I should add. This will also help in future pieces like UF and all of its child stories.
Gonna try getting Uncertain Future part 3 done this week, or started at least. I have some major projects coming up and I have yet to get started on them (...) so I might skip it this week and the next.
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I noticed that details were a bit sparce in the beginning of dreamin, but I figured that was because Chihaya's head wasn't too clear.
Sev:
I guess here on the Forum Detail isn't too big of a deal for us because were already familiar with what the Idols and most of the locations they would be in look like. Its easier for us to see the picture the story in our heads because we're familiar with it. If you want to share this story with non iM@S friends then I'd say go ahead and work on your details.
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