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Grace Does Stupid Stuff in Her Spare Time, AKA Grace's Fanfiction Audiobooks

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Amazing_Grace:
I have the thing on my computer, but the problem with losing the papers is that I lost my cast list with them. ^^"

altuixde:
I've finally listened to all five parts... twice! Part 5 was pretty dramatic! Nin reminded me of Galuf from Final Fantasy V. One question, though: how come Heather lost her free will when she was possessed but Disco and Zopheus still have theirs?

Amazing_Grace:
Thanks for listening. xD I'm glad if you were entertained. I literally lost my voice recorded part five XD But it was worth it if people laugh as much as I did while recording it.

As for why Heather lost her free will when she was possessed...I honestly have no idea. XDD All the plot holes are part of what makes me so ashamed of this.
I think it's because Heather already had a demon living inside her that's never actually explained or mentioned but makes her angry. That, combined with possession, makes her more susceptible to evil than the others.
Seriously though I didn't think this through ;-;

altuixde:
Ah, you're welcome! The episodes definitely were entertaining. Sorry I took so long to finish these five; I was kinda busy and I'm easily distracted, so that's something for me to be ashamed of. I think I can offer a tip on planning out stories, though: always write the ending first, or at least early on. That way, while you're writing, you can make all the strands of the story come together because you already know the ending and the whole thing will make sense. But I'm kinda jumping the gun with that suggestion because you haven't uploaded the end yet. :) Also, even in professional works, there are sometimes plot holes. I think plot holes are sometimes necessary in order to tell the story that the author wants to tell.

Amazing_Grace:
That's totally okay. :)
I'm about midway through the third part. Hopefully it'll tie up at least a couple of loose ends, but considering I was eleven, probably not. XD

My writing has increased nine-thousand-fold since these days, so maybe one day, I can show you guys something iM@S-themed that's actually good. :P You give good advice, so thank you! I usually at least know a chapter or two ahead of whatever I'm writing, but sometimes I just totally lose it. I'll make sure to be planning the ending as I move ahead with more recent stuff.

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