Hibiki and Takane fanart (WIP)

[millefeuille]

Here's a pencil drawing I did of Hibiki and Takane a while ago. I'm gonna ink and colour it when I get home from my trip. (And then update everyone with my progress!)
I really love those two together, as I think that their personalities contrast each other in an interesting way.

[ChocoCats]

I kinda wish that you put the picture vertically with better lighting. Anyways, I feel that Hibiki's bangs are a bit flat and her face is a bit too wide. Otherwie, I'm looking forward to the final product. 

[millefeuille]

Ah, I uploaded the picture on mobile. The photo was vertical when I took it so the program must have rotated it ^^;. I'd thought Hibiki's face looked a bit off, thank you for helping me figure out why

[altuixde]

Nice job! The expression on Takane's face captures her serene personality. I'd like to see some folds or wrinkles in her dress, though, but I admit that I don't know how to draw them, myself. By the way, was this picture taken on an airplane?

[MetalPredat0r]

Gigantic picture file aside, I think it looks pretty nice so far! I do agree that Hibiki's bangs look a bit on the flat side, but that's something that can easily be fixed before inking. Overall, nicely done. I like the expressions. They capture the characters really well and the contrast between Takane's calmness and Hibiki's hyperactive nature.

[millefeuille]

Seeing the image file on my computer now made me realize how large and poor quality it was, haha.
Anyways, here's the inked version of the drawing. I'm gonna touch up this lineart some more and colour it in.

Nice job! The expression on Takane's face captures her serene personality. I'd like to see some folds or wrinkles in her dress, though, but I admit that I don't know how to draw them, myself. By the way, was this picture taken on an airplane?

Thank you! I added some folds to Takane's skirt. Hopefully they look okay. No, I took the picture in my hotel room. The lighting there wasn't too good, especially because it was night-time.

Gigantic picture file aside, I think it looks pretty nice so far! I do agree that Hibiki's bangs look a bit on the flat side, but that's something that can easily be fixed before inking. Overall, nicely done. I like the expressions. They capture the characters really well and the contrast between Takane's calmness and Hibiki's hyperactive nature.

Thanks! Hopefully this time the file is a bit smaller ^^;. I fixed Hibiki's bangs and her face shape a bit, I think they look better now.

[altuixde]

I've gotta be honest... the horizontal folds in Takane's skirt don't look quite right. I feel bad about this since it's because of my suggestion. I shouldn't have made my suggestion without giving an example of what I thought Takane's skirt should look like. In the rest of the image, however, I think your composition is intact. Looks like you have a steady hand. Also, didn't Hibiki have a little bit of blush on her face before you inked it?

[millefeuille]

I've gotta be honest... the horizontal folds in Takane's skirt don't look quite right. I feel bad about this since it's because of my suggestion. I shouldn't have made my suggestion without giving an example of what I thought Takane's skirt should look like. In the rest of the image, however, I think your composition is intact. Looks like you have a steady hand. Also, didn't Hibiki have a little bit of blush on her face before you inked it?

I might get rid of them or make them more subtle. I guess I should've asked for an example, haha. Thank you! Yeah, I'm going to put the blush back in when I colour it, don't worry!