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The Portal of Zeta: Knocked into a 4-Koma (art page)
« on: July 21, 2014, 05:15:12 am »
Hi guys! Remember that 4-Koma art style I promoted on my Neo Vision page? I decided to dedicate an entire thread to 4-Koma style fanart. I'll start with Neo Vision's poster idol Sakura Shiranui.


Let me know what you think about this style. Any feedback helps greatly!

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Re: The Portal of Zeta: Knocked into a 4-Koma (art page)
« Reply #1 on: July 21, 2014, 05:16:31 am »
Miki (mai hanii) in a dress shirt, hands behind her back, daydreaming about her onigiri prince (hence why she's blushing).

EDIT: I made a few changes to this one. Please look below.
« Last Edit: July 22, 2014, 02:05:37 am by ZetaFlare »

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Re: The Portal of Zeta: Knocked into a 4-Koma (art page)
« Reply #2 on: July 21, 2014, 01:22:57 pm »
Like I said in the Neo Vision post, its certainly a cute art style. Only complaint I have is that, for Miki, you could add a bit more curves to her. I notice this especially with the chest in that her cleavage is showing immensely, but there are no curves to indicate of breasts. Really, that's the only major criticism I have.
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Re: The Portal of Zeta: Knocked into a 4-Koma (art page)
« Reply #3 on: July 21, 2014, 03:18:53 pm »
Like I said in the Neo Vision post, its certainly a cute art style. Only complaint I have is that, for Miki, you could add a bit more curves to her. I notice this especially with the chest in that her cleavage is showing immensely, but there are no curves to indicate of breasts. Really, that's the only major criticism I have.

Thanks. I'll consider that next time, especially if I draw someone even "bigger," i.e. Azusa or Nozomi.

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Re: The Portal of Zeta: Knocked into a 4-Koma (art page)
« Reply #4 on: July 21, 2014, 08:45:25 pm »
Nico-nico-nii! Happy birthday Nico-nico!

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Re: The Portal of Zeta: Knocked into a 4-Koma (art page)
« Reply #5 on: July 22, 2014, 02:07:55 am »
Here's 4-Koma Miki again. I wasn't too satisfied with the last one, so I made a few changes, adding pockets to her shirt and making her chest curvier to match her cleavage.

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Re: The Portal of Zeta: Knocked into a 4-Koma (art page)
« Reply #6 on: July 24, 2014, 06:43:41 am »
Much better with Miki.

Isn't it coincidental that Nico's birthday falls right after Umi Day? ^_^; Anyway, Nico-nico-nii and a happy belated birthday to Nico! Hopefully Maki bothered to get her a present!
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Re: The Portal of Zeta: Knocked into a 4-Koma (art page)
« Reply #7 on: July 25, 2014, 06:32:40 am »
Ami seducing/teasing her Nii-chan. This was actually inspired by a dream I had one time involving a photoshoot with Ami.

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Re: The Portal of Zeta: Knocked into a 4-Koma (art page)
« Reply #8 on: August 03, 2014, 04:30:48 am »
This is my dream! For Honoka on her birthday!