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Re: Virgo tries translyrics for fun and... boredom. I guess.
« Reply #15 on: July 13, 2014, 09:42:05 pm »
Yay! Now I can sing "Ippai ippai" in English! Thank you very much!

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Re: Virgo tries translyrics for fun and... boredom. I guess.
« Reply #16 on: July 19, 2014, 06:24:03 pm »
New (very rough) set incoming:

DIAMOND
Wiki referenced as typical.
This one is a LOT more interpretive than some of the others, so the lyrics aren't so direct and are instead based more on the themes I interpret from it.

I don't include refrains in the lyrics, mostly because, if you're trying to sing it, I'm sure you've heard them.
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Go on, imagine
An infinite willpower's inside all this world
Even a little thing
Makes different colors show up in each aura

Whether I am all alone
Or if I am by your side
I know that I can take on all the storms ahead
Because I've done it before,
I know I'll do it again
And I'll go on to become a...

DIAMOND
Shining and sparkling with a beautiful light
Because I know in my heart, I'll become the number one
While I watch all the beauty in this world sparkle, I'll feel like it's all mine
Shine and keep shining as if you were reborn
I know that on the inside, there is a gleaming gemstone
Sparkle, sparkle, sparkle, sparkle
You'll become even brighter than a diamond

Aiming for mirages,
Chasing dreams in the future is so universal
Every, or just one,
The seconds spent are something shared by all

Rather than just wish and pray
For all you want to happen
Aim to become brighter than the skies in midday
Because I do want this dream
I know that I'll reach this dream
It's all because I am...

DIAMOND
Flying onward as if I have wings made of light
In this body, all of us will go and be only one
The heartbeat of all of us combined is something that I do love so much
Fly, and don't let those broken wings keep you grounded
Not even for the seconds that you show doubt and sadness
Shine on, shine on, shine on, shine on
Become the never-unbreakable diamond...

Hey, as you polish your willpower just like a stone
It'll last with no end forever
So, go onward and shine so bright...

Look, I'm doing all that I love...
Look, I'm feeling freed from burden
And I'll feel this way, forever...

DIAMOND
Shining and sparkling with a beautiful light
Because I know in my heart, I'll become the number one
While I watch all the beauty in this world sparkle, I'll feel like it's all mine
Shine and keep shining as if you were reborn
I know that on the inside, there is a gleaming gemstone
Sparkle, sparkle, sparkle, sparkle
You'll become even brighter than a diamond
« Last Edit: August 25, 2014, 06:07:18 pm by Virgofall »

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Re: Virgo tries translyrics for fun and... boredom. I guess.
« Reply #17 on: August 24, 2014, 08:16:28 am »
Random jolt of inspiration came. Was super-effective.

Jitensha
Also from wiki!
I'm pretty happy with this set of lyrics for the most part, however, I would like some feedback on the matching lines in underline and bold. (Those would end up changed together, as they're tied together.)

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"Hey, won't you wait a sec? I just wanted to say..."
I bring my cushions closer to me
Oh, the same dream again, how many times is it now?
I know I really need to tell you soon...

When I'm heading on outside
The dazzling sun makes me blink
The chainlock is gone, and the stopper's lifted
Pedaling on I'm feeling the wind in my short hair
Doesn't matter, the path I take
I'll keep on going and never ever stop

"I do love you!"
Using all of my heart
"I do love you!"
Using all of my strength
I'm pushing these pedals hard as I can
It's like a propeller, and it's making me fly!
"I do love you!"
Raising my voice to you
"I do love you!"
Raising my speed to you
This feeling's hurting so much in my chest
but I know I'll go on,
and it's all because "I love you..."

I'm so used to taking this dark tunnel I'm in
Yet today it just seems a bit scary
But it won't stop me now, I'll just switch on a light
Shooting forward like meteors up high

Soon as I manage to get out
I see that your house is in my sights
The bell rings super-loud, I feel like I'll blow up
Instead, it's time to take a deep breath and relax!
Giving the intercom a push
A voice comes out and it's one I know well

"I just hate this"
All of this nervousness
"I just hate this"
All of this hesitance
I've lost all handling on these feelings
But the brakes just won't stop them anymore
"I just hate this"
Yet I'm glad I am here
"I just hate this"
Yet I'm happy I'm here
Time keeps passing, as if it never ends
And as the door opens
Now it is only you and I...

What I'm gonna say right now,
Please listen carefully:
"Hey, won't you wait a sec? I just wanted to say..."
Oh, the words won't come out
Even though I want them to,
It's so hard 'cause it's you...

I bring you closer to me
I'm sorry that it's so soon
But you know, I really love you
And I
Don't ever
Wanna let you go!
"I do love you!"
You are my number one
"I do love you!"
And my only one
I'll take you to anyplace that you want,
Anytime you want, on this bike of mine
No matter how far, and it's all because "I love you!"
« Last Edit: August 24, 2014, 08:23:21 am by Virgofall »

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« Reply #18 on: August 24, 2014, 06:11:09 pm »
This also came from said jolt, though, it took a bit more time to do (for one, I needed sleep)

edeN
I know this song is INSANELY popular around here, so I sincerely hope I did it justice with my rendition! Wiki used for reference.
(Random: Why does it feel like this song and Vault that Borderline! feel like different interpretations of the same situation? And yes, VtB is somewhere on my list... dunno when, but it's there.)

This set will sometimes see ninja-edits. You've been warned.
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Nobody loves you like I can love you
and I won't let go

When I first met you underneath that dark blue sky
It was when I found what "love" had really felt like
And I believe that these feelings I have were fated

As you said goodbyes to the girl that you once loved
I still recall just how your lips had felt on mine
I'm not alone, no, I'm not alone anymore right?

I know that you and I can't return to any time we had before now
In my sleeplessness, love and dreams combined to bring out a light

To my dearest one, "I love you"
I just repeat my words so many times
As if my words to you are like shooting stars
Flying over your sky

As if a spell had simply been cast on me
Always I know I believe
That we'll stay forever love

The ones moving on forward to an unknown world
Are the two destined to become Adam and Eve
The future from here is one that's shared by you and me

Having considered all of this situation
Naturally, towards you is my next motion
The secret that we share is what's standing by our sides

Not even the girl who you once loved can get anyplace in between us
Accelerating ever on, you and I keep running away

I want to meet you, "I miss you"
My heart is just racing so painfully
From here won't you please stay with me
If it means I'll always be in your arms

As the clouds part from high up within the skies, shooting stars
Continually rain down from above us

Give me even more of your love, I don't want anyone but you near me
Don't ever let go of my heart, even if I'm only a game that you'll win
From back then, I gave a wish to those blue skies  up above, and I knew
My wish was forever love...

To my dearest one, "I love you"
I just repeat my words so many times
As if my words to you are like shooting stars
Flying over your sky

As if a spell had simply been cast on me
Always I know I believe
That we'll stay forever love
« Last Edit: September 11, 2014, 07:36:45 pm by Virgofall »

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Re: Virgo tries translyrics for fun and... boredom. I guess.
« Reply #19 on: August 24, 2014, 07:49:20 pm »
Thank you for "Eden"! These lyrics are really singable! ^-^

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Re: Virgo tries translyrics for fun and... boredom. I guess.
« Reply #20 on: August 24, 2014, 09:51:25 pm »
Quite. You thought of doing covers with these, Virgo? Your OST video with Sword Art Online was pretty damn good.
Suddenly, bow-wow-wow~. :3

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Re: Virgo tries translyrics for fun and... boredom. I guess.
« Reply #21 on: August 25, 2014, 06:13:02 pm »
Did some slight edits on edeN yesterday, finished up DIAMOND. All three songs had just been added to front-page list.

Quite. You thought of doing covers with these, Virgo? Your OST video with Sword Art Online was pretty damn good.
It's originally why I began making them. However, there's two limits to my covering -
1) My natural breath control. (I tend to sing with power behind my vocals, and sometimes too much.)
2) I live in an apartment building where walls are thin; this limits the times I can do so without disrupting my neighbors.

I'm very perfectionistic, so I don't upload something unless I feel it's to my personal standards. Though as of late, it's more "I don't find the time."

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Re: Virgo tries translyrics for fun and... boredom. I guess.
« Reply #22 on: August 30, 2014, 02:41:39 am »
Still love your lyrics. edeN is really singable, and I love it. Need to actually sing through Jitensha quietly before making any judgments of that one, but I'm sure it's great because Makoto sings it.


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« Reply #23 on: September 11, 2014, 07:41:58 pm »
Need to actually sing through Jitensha quietly before making any judgments of that one, but I'm sure it's great because Makoto sings it.
Pffft, bias showing much? XD In any case, thank you for your comment.

Edited edeN (again; you can tell I really care a lot about it, though I think it's good/less fragmented now), working on a master for Acceleration. The song is... surprisingly repetitive, and if not for a certain set of lines making me feel indecisive on its interpretation, it wasn't too hard. Putting them here for now, so I can go back to them later; they're not yet ready to integrate.

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Unparalleled dreams...

I was born to stand tall in this place, I know that here's where I'm meant to be
That's what I really want to see in my future
The others you meet won't bring you down, there's
Only one way!

You can bring your true ambitions to life
Just start them up right now from here!

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« Reply #24 on: September 12, 2014, 10:21:43 pm »
Dun-dun-dun, time for another new set!

Saihyou
Wiki as typical. This went to personal interpretation at some points, but I think it came out well. Might (huge might) do a version of this without BGM in a bit.
The "свет" "light" I just put into English as well; I didn't think rendering it in another language would do the lyrics any favors.

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The darkness, the darkness, within my heart  reflects everything I see with my eyes
As if the bottom of the sea  takes my breaths  hiding  them all away

The pain that I feel just keeps overflowing
Left to wander after you turned away, and I gave my
"Goodbye" to you
Unable to turn back, so isolated and lost
My heart's slowly succumbing...

Even though I'm struggling, I'll just keep on walking forward!
Within this wind all of the monochrome
Inside this town, the people, and my dreams
Simply fades away
Even during the times I'll struggle and falter
I'll never stop taking this path because
At the end I know there'll be a light for me, and this light holds no sadnesses nor pain
These feelings that have darkened my heart, I know that they won't stay that way forever
Instead they'll just become a bind holding,
And taking form  as the light in my heart

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« Reply #25 on: September 17, 2014, 06:45:35 pm »
Saihyou, huh? I really wanna listen to the new solos, do you know where I could find them? ;-;

In the mean time...

Pffft, bias showing much? XD In any case, thank you for your comment.

Yes. >:I
You're welcome. XD


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Re: Virgo tries translyrics for fun and... boredom. I guess.
« Reply #26 on: January 13, 2015, 08:24:21 pm »
How could I overlook Saihyou?! :o  The lyrics are so beautiful! By the way, is there any progress in the M@STER version of Acceleration?

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« Reply #27 on: January 25, 2015, 08:33:16 pm »
By the way, is there any progress in the M@STER version of Acceleration?
Frankly, no, and I don't anticipate any anytime soon. The middle-eight's translation is difficult for me to interpret, which in turn makes it difficult to put into a lyrical form.

I didn't completely forget about this thread, but a lot of other things have been taking up my time. I do have a few sets of lyrics in progress (that I can actually finish), some ready to post, but I'd like to at least record one of these sets for myself as a sort of promotion, which is why I haven't made many posts in here.