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MetalPredat0r:
--- Quote from: altuixde on November 09, 2014, 07:22:19 am ---Both Eri and Shiho look good, but I like the Eri drawing slightly better. Eri's hair looks nice and so does the expression on her face. The longer part of Shiho's hair looks a little two dimensional, but I don't know how to make it look more three dimensional, myself. It's possible that I'm not as drawn to the expression on Shiho's face simply because she isn't smiling, but maybe you can make her expression more captivating without having to make her smile. Lastly, Shiho's thorax doesn't look quite big enough. She looks like she needs bigger lungs. The drawing of Eri is better in this regard. I'm really nitpicking, though. Can't go too realistic, or else it doesn't look like manga/anime anymore.
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With Shiho's hair, I see what you mean. The top part is certainly more detailed than the bottom part, as in there's more lines added to the overall hair while the longer bottom part looks relatively flat by comparison.
As for Shiho's expression, I was gonna draw her scowling, but I felt that that would look too harsh on her, so I gave her a much tamer look. Maybe I should have gone with the scowl, I dunno.
I appreciate that you liked Eri, though! I also feel that she looks better than Shiho in this sketch.
liza94:
--- Quote from: MetalPredat0r on November 09, 2014, 04:50:57 am ---Anyway, I at least got Minami done. This was requested by liza94.
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Thank you! Minami looks so cute in your style!
But her left arm looks strange, I don't even know why. As for her right one... it seems to me that the fingers are stright from the arm, without a hand.
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I like Eri more than Shiho as well. Shiho's eyes look ... cartoonish? I'm sorry, I'm a bad critic.
MetalPredat0r:
--- Quote from: liza94 on November 09, 2014, 06:30:37 pm ---Thank you! Minami looks so cute in your style!
But her left arm looks strange, I don't even know why. As for her right one... it seems to me that the fingers are stright from the arm, without a hand.
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I've always sucked at hands, so that's no surprise that there's a mistake with them.
--- Quote from: liza94 on November 09, 2014, 06:30:37 pm ---I like Eri more than Shiho as well. Shiho's eyes look ... cartoonish? I'm sorry, I'm a bad critic.
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Not sure if I can take that as a criticism, since I don't aim for realism, but maybe there could be an issue with how the eyes are positioned? Not too sure.
Anyway, I'll have Sae done whenever I can.
liza94:
--- Quote from: MetalPredat0r on November 09, 2014, 10:42:00 pm ---Not sure if I can take that as a criticism, since I don't aim for realism, but maybe there could be an issue with how the eyes are positioned? Not too sure.
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Maybe you are right...
Amazing_Grace:
I still love everything you do.
I didn't notice much of a difference between Eri and Shiho in that picture, but I can notice your style evolving. So why are altuixide and I the only ones posting on the "Art: Then and Now" thread? I made that for you people, show off. I like how both of them turned out, honestly. Only thing I can really mention is that Shiho's forearms seem a little wide? As it nears the wrist, the arm should begin to narrow again. As it is it seems the arm just sort of abruptly becomes a wrist. Does that make any sense at all? Eri is fine since she does have sleeves, you can't see the shape of the arm.
I dunno, I just wanted to contribute. ;-;
But I actually like Minami. I think you did a fantastic job of the perspective of her right (technically left, our right) arm. It really looks like it's bent back. Great work!
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