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ChocoCats:
Sweet, new art! Let's see... I look at the rest and I found a couple of things to improve. The first things are the eyes. Try to differentiate them because they all look the same. If you look at the official art, everyone's eye shapes (besides the twins) are shaped differently. By doing so, it gives the character more personality than just the eyebrows + mouth. The rest are proportions. The head should be slightly smaller than the body area including the waist and hips. The hips + the crouch area are a bit too high and for some, too small. Also be aware the the heights of these characters because a couple like Nana, Akane, Yuko, and Sae are smaller than you drew them to be. I hope this advice helps you on your artwork and I'll be looking forward to them. :)
MetalPredat0r:
--- Quote from: ChocoCats on July 29, 2014, 07:22:58 am ---Sweet, new art! Let's see... I look at the rest and I found a couple of things to improve. The first things are the eyes. Try to differentiate them because they all look the same. If you look at the official art, everyone's eye shapes (besides the twins) are shaped differently. By doing so, it gives the character more personality than just the eyebrows + mouth. The rest are proportions. The head should be slightly smaller than the body area including the waist and hips. The hips + the crouch area are a bit too high and for some, too small. Also be aware the the heights of these characters because a couple like Nana, Akane, Yuko, and Sae are smaller than you drew them to be. I hope this advice helps you on your artwork and I'll be looking forward to them. :)
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I actually look at everyone's eye shapes from official art and I try to follow them as accurately as possible. I guess if they all look alike, I'm not doing my job well enough. I DO need to try harder with that.
Maybe I should try doing skeleton models first for more major drawings. It could help with how everything should be proportioned.
Height has never been a strong point. I guess you can say I purposefully made everyone on equal heights to further display their attires and I may as well handwave it with "Some of them are on stools". But yeah, I see where you're coming from.
Thanks for the advice!
liza94:
Can you draw only Sae, please? She is so beautiful! ;)
MetalPredat0r:
Batch Six Point Five: Aka, the Forgotten Ones till Now! I told you I was saving these three!
Left to Right: Mio Honda, Kirari Moroboshi, Syoko Hoshi
Following ChocoCats' advice to the best of my ability with these. I may have still messed up with eyes and proportions, but I at the very least took heights into consideration. Not too difficult since these three can be summed up as short, average, and ABSURDLY tall. Hope I at least got that covered.
Mio's is ripped straight from W4U while Kirari's is a first look at her's, since she is also playable. Syoko's is new. Also, I actually drew a Mio that doesn't look too plain or freaking psychotic! Yay!
Stay tuned, there's still one more pic for this little project.
--- Quote from: liza94 on July 29, 2014, 12:01:27 pm ---Can you draw only Sae, please? She is so beautiful! ;)
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I might actually do that afterward. Should she be in casual or wrestling attire? Either or is fine with me.
liza94:
--- Quote from: MetalPredat0r on July 30, 2014, 05:53:36 am ---Batch Six Point Five: Aka, the Forgotten Ones till Now! I told you I was saving these three!
Left to Right: Mio Honda, Kirari Moroboshi, Syoko Hoshi
Following ChocoCats' advice to the best of my ability with these. I may have still messed up with eyes and proportions, but I at the very least took heights into consideration. Not too difficult since these three can be summed up as short, average, and ABSURDLY tall. Hope I at least got that covered.
Mio's is ripped straight from W4U while Kirari's is a first look at her's, since she is also playable. Syoko's is new. Also, I actually drew a Mio that doesn't look too plain or freaking psychotic! Yay!
Stay tuned, there's still one more pic for this little project.
I might actually do that afterward. Should she be in casual or wrestling attire? Either or is fine with me.
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I have an idea. Draw Sae and Minami in their casual clothes!
By the way, this picture is great! I like Kirari even though I don't like Kirari! :o Even though you don't colour your drawings, I still can tell who is who!
I know why you draw eyes like this. It's because of Eri, right? ;)
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