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liza94:
I like all the new routes, especially Kotone's! :D  Honestly speaking, I was sceptical about her (as well as Hikari) when you posted the characters' bios, but now all my scepticism is gone!
Do Emi next, please!


--- Quote from: ZetaFlare on October 02, 2014, 02:45:12 am ---As soon as Himeko swings by, Kotone catches her attention, calling her by her true name “Alice.” It just so happens both of their families are involved in businesses in some way…the Ri family has their tea house while Himeko’s parents are both big-time entrepreneurs. In a way, Himeko does not seem to have any respect for men either. To her, they are all mindless insects that she can easily manipulate into her loyal servants. All it took was a little money and a little “service.” Kotone, however, once thought all men were as pitiful as her father. However, Kenji helped her change her views for the better. Kotone claims Himeko is just as vulnerable as her fans she holds in such low regard. While she manipulates them, she has no idea that Yamato is manipulating her like putty in his hands. Himeko angrily silences Kotone, claiming Yamato knows what he is doing and knows what’s best for her. She owes him everything. Unlike Kotone, Himeko does not have to worry about her family’s business collapsing. Being multimillionaires, her parents are guaranteed lifelong success, unlike Kotone’s mother and grandmother with their “cheap” family-owned shack. Himeko warns Kotone that if she ever publicizes the name Alice Treyton, she will make Kotone and her family suffer in the worst possible way. Himeko runs back to Yamato’s limo and can be heard slightly sobbing. Kotone sighs, claiming she might never be able to understand what a haughty princess wannabe may be thinking.

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Riffa-chan~! :'(  Kotone was able to trust men and became happier, but nothing is changed for Himeko! :( It's unfair! :(  And I even can't curse Yamato with "May Chihaya-Master become a new idol in your agency!" because technically, she have already become one! :(

Amazing_Grace:
Just wanted you to know I'm still around, but I got pretty backed up with stories to read when I took my hiatus. :P So just trying to catch up. Really liking Nozomi so far, though.

ZetaFlare:

--- Quote from: liza94 on October 02, 2014, 08:46:11 am ---I like all the new routes, especially Kotone's! :D  Honestly speaking, I was sceptical about her (as well as Hikari) when you posted the characters' bios, but now all my scepticism is gone!

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Why Hikari? Was it because I introduced her as a typical tsundere?

Kotone I can understand though, considering her hatred of men. I did want to add a few events that would make her get over it and change her views for the better...to accept the good with the bad (like her father and Yamato).


--- Quote from: Amazing_Grace on October 03, 2014, 06:24:47 pm ---Just wanted you to know I'm still around, but I got pretty backed up with stories to read when I took my hiatus. :P So just trying to catch up. Really liking Nozomi so far, though.

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I was thinking you were missing out! I'm pretty proud of what I have done for Reika's route. I won't spoil anything, but there is a moment that generated quite the reaction.

Amazing_Grace:
Phew! Just read through everything I missed out on. I still love your characters. Hinata is adorable, Hikari makes me chuckle (I really love tsunderes, honestly), Kotone is really interesting and I swear my soul broke in two when I read about her father...dang. That's just not OK for a girl that age to be put through. Poor Kotone! I'm rooting for you!, Reika is actually adorable...I just love them all.

Also Nozomi.
I wonder what would happen if she were in a unit with Setsuna and Hikari/Momoko. Since all of them seem to have that "You all need to work harder, gosh darn it, get to my level!" kind of view?

Regarding the plot twist with Reika, that was pretty interesting! I kinda started to suspect it after reading about her encounter with the children n the alleyway (that seemed to know her), but nonetheless a good plot twist. Poor Reika. ;-;

ZetaFlare:
For a Nozomi unit, Setsuna for sure, but definitely more Chiyo than Hikari or Momoko (who only used their tough-girl attitudes to hide their inner insecurities...Momoko wanting to be noticed and Hikari with her little inferiority complex).

I gave Chiyo kind of a serious pull-no-punches attitude too as kind of an example of how experience breeds wisdom. Being an idol for five years, she knows pretty much every rope that needs to be known, but never got the chance to experience it because of all those incompetent staff members she worked under.

Hinata is special to me. I just simply had to have a disabled idol, so I turned the hyper loli trope into a girl that actually does have ADHD (loud voice, impulsive, etc). Not sure if any really do exist, but being mildly disabled myself, it does send a message.

Sorry I'm a bit distracted by Smash Bros. right now but once I get the chance I'll start on Emi's story.

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