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liza94:
When I read Reika's description I thought she was the second Takane, but now I'm really like Reika! Her story is the best so far! Who is next? By the way, I'm noticed that your stories lack events with the rivals (those events are what I like SP for.).

ZetaFlare:

--- Quote from: liza94 on September 03, 2014, 11:30:39 am ---When I read Reika's description I thought she was the second Takane, but now I'm really like Reika! Her story is the best so far! Who is next? By the way, I'm noticed that your stories lack events with the rivals (those events are what I like SP for.).

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I didn't want to spoil anything huge in the description and thought I'd save it for the Story Mode rundown.

I see...then again, there is that moment after the IU finals opening ceremonies where we get to hear the true intentions of your leader's main rival and perhaps have a conversation. Remember when Jun tried to cheer up Maya after she got yelled at by Yamato? Remember Sakura's long history with Kagura?

Not sure who's next now. Momoko and Hikari are still up there. Nagisa and Hinata might follow after I add a few more things to spice up their stories. Hinata may look like a Yayoi clone, but I decided to add something extra to her usual "loli genki girl" aura--she has ADHD, which is revealed a bit later on having to put up with "ableist" haters. I wanted to prove that even "disabled" girls can be successful idols too especially since I, myself, am disabled in my own right..

ZetaFlare:
Aida Momoko’s Route

Kenji first meets Momoko at the office’s cafeteria. She is singing along to her MP3 player. Kenji immediately recognizes her lyrics—relations. However, her voice is a bit off-key. Not only that, but some passersby look at her thinking, “What does she think she’s doing?” Kenji walks up to her and has to wave at her to get her attention because of her headphones. Momoko initially reacts with disgust, thinking he is just some common lovestruck boy trying to ask her out on a date. However, once she hears the news about her debut, her face lights up. Momoko is eager to display her talent and irresistible cuteness to the nation!

Momoko is a little disappointed about the President’s choice for her producer. She specifically asked for a charming young prince of a producer who would sweep her off her feet, not some nerdy-looking geek who could possibly be a hidden pervert or stalker. Plus, once Momoko meets her partners a week later, she immediately assigns herself as the unit’s leader, thinking the other two are trying to steal her spotlight. Kenji somehow manages to earn her trust…for now. Still, Kenji is wondering. Judging people based on appearance alone…a moody and self-centered demeanor…Momoko clearly shows teenage angst and naivety. Combined with her slightly below-average singing voice and seeming inability to be a team player, does she really have what it takes to be an idol?

At the debut audition, Momoko puts on quite the performance and shines much, much brighter than she did the last two weeks. Kenji and her partners are very surprised. It’s like she’s a natural at this kind of thing. “Of course it’s natural for me, silly! I am the prettiest after all! Even the judges know that!” Seeing her in such a good mood, Kenji does not really have the heart to tell her that her singing was still a bit off. Plus, her partners (depending on who they are) start to get a little fed up with her selfish attitude. Still, it’s nothing a few lessons and promotions cannot fix. Maybe she will learn in due time…

(to be continued)

I know Momoko seems a little "I really want to peg that wannabe with trash!" right now, but just wait until I get deeper into her story.

liza94:

--- Quote from: ZetaFlare on September 03, 2014, 06:19:31 pm ---I see...then again, there is that moment after the IU finals opening ceremonies where we get to hear the true intentions of your leader's main rival and perhaps have a conversation. Remember when Jun tried to cheer up Maya after she got yelled at by Yamato? Remember Sakura's long history with Kagura?

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Of course I do, but it's not enough! Kagura and Himeko seem monsters for me before that "after the IU finals opening ceremonies" event!

ZetaFlare:

--- Quote from: liza94 on September 05, 2014, 01:22:03 pm ---Of course I do, but it's not enough! Kagura and Himeko seem monsters for me before that "after the IU finals opening ceremonies" event!

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Oh dear...now I'm starting to wonder if my delivery for NAZO was pretty weak after all. Then again, I haven't seen many of the rival interactions in SP. I know there wasn't much out-of-story-event interaction with Jupiter in iM@S2 (aside from Touma). I kind of wanted to have NAZO's harsh attitude towards ZetaPro a mystery until the truth about their rival is revealed (how NAZO's producer is Kenji's long-time rival and the President's spoiled, corrupted son who has declared war against his father's company to prove the true strength of money, the upper class, and big businesses). Then at the IU finals opening ceremonies, we discover the rival idol's true intentions, which were either meant to justify their "I must win no matter what"/"I won't lose to low-lives like you" approach or just to prove how much of a stick-in-the-butt Yamato is.

Maybe I could add some what-if scenarios in the future...like what would happen if Karen came across Kagura (considering their VAs in a certain spin-off anime)? Hmm? ;)

Anyway, stay tuned for another piece of Momoko's route later on today! (I go by the Pacific time zone, so subtract 9 hours from this forum's time).

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