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Re: The Portal of Zeta: iDOLM@STER Neo Vision
« Reply #240 on: August 24, 2014, 06:55:36 am »
Hijikata Chiyo's Route, conclusion

Later that night, Chiyo is seen in her apartment chatting with Takuma. Takuma heard the news and congratulates her on finally reaching the second leg of the IU, but he still notices Chiyo looking a little upset. She believes she still has a ways to go in order to catch up with NAZO. It seems the more successful she becomes, the more NAZO becomes a thorn in her side. Takuma believes the problem may be that while performing, she is just thinking about him and the promise she made to him. He assures her she is not alone. Of course Chiyo still has her main squeeze who cares about her more than anything, but she also has two idols working with her in a unit of three. Outside from her time with 961Pro, this is relatively new to Chiyo. Groups work best if they work as one. Perhaps she should spend some time with her partners a little more in order to strengthen their bonds. This way she can adjust to the styles of younger idols and be able to flow more fluidly with them. Takuma knows Chiyo loves him with all her heart, but now is not the time to worry about him. She is still an idol. As long as she focuses on her unit and her fans, she will always be the amazing angelic idol he fell in love with years ago. Fulfilling her promise would then be a cakewalk. Still, Takuma wants to make sure he is the first in line for her performances and new albums.

Over the next few weeks, Chiyo takes some time to bond with her partners. She never realized just how energetic, fun-loving, and outgoing her younger peers could be. Even though they seem unfocused, they are still very hard workers.

As ZetaPro receives a writ of challenge from NAZO to appear at the Harvest Moon Festival, Chiyo feels more than ready to take on Kagura this time around. Unfortunately, both performances get cancelled due to a pyrotechnic malfunction. Kenji can really tell ZetaPro’s trio has improved drastically since they passed the IU prelims. Chiyo is beginning to realize what she can accomplish with the power of unity. Yamato arrives to pick up NAZO and to rain on Kenji’s parade. According to Yamato, the way ZetaPro manages Chiyo proves the weakness and stupidity of middle class companies. They seem to have managed to successfully trick and bribe her away from 961Pro. They thought they could cash in on an experienced idol even though she was nearing the end of her rope. Worst of all, they allow her to get into a relationship! That’s right…Yamato knows Chiyo’s secret. He knows about the promise Chiyo made to Takuma. Had Chiyo been working for a more elite record company like RyuuseiPro, she would have been canned right on the spot. Then, gossip regarding the scandal would destroy not only her career and image, but the image of idols everywhere. Kenji tries to interfere, but Yamato scoffs at his weak defenses. It seems as though he is in cahoots with Chiyo and the President to cover up her relationship. Yamato then reminds Chiyo of all the abuse and suffering she received from her past producers, claiming she should have known better after five years. What if Kenji is just deceiving Chiyo? What if he is just as selfish and filthy as those hacks who previously managed her career? Chiyo soon stands up to Kenji. It was he who taught her that not all producers are like that. Not only is he very kind and caring, but he really knows what he is doing. If it were not for his aid, who knows where she would be now? Yamato calls Chiyo a fool, claiming Kenji has made her soft. Yamato asks Chiyo to do the idol industry a favor and call it quits while she still can. If she continues the path she is on, her utter humiliation will be inevitable, especially since he knows NAZO will mop the floor with her in the IU finals and he knows her true intentions. Either way, he will break Chiyo’s promise. He laughs as he heads back to his limo with the rest of NAZO.

Chiyo is distressed. Now that Yamato knows about her relationship with Takuma, she is certain Yamato will try to use it against her once they enter the final segment of the IU. However, she recalls what Takuma told her…don’t worry about him and just focus on her idol work. Unnecessary worry will only hinder her progress. Takuma assures Chiyo that he is sure everything will be all right in the end. He even promises to get a front-row ticket once she is set to perform at the IU finals. Surprisingly, Yamato still has yet to make a move…

On the day of the IU finals opening ceremonies, Chiyo overhears a conversation between Kagura and Yamato. It appears as though Kagura and Yamato have known each other for a long time and seem to care for each other very much. Kagura feels as though she must win the IU for Yamato’s sake as well as her family’s. Who knows…could they secretly be in a relationship just like Chiyo is? After the conversation ends, Kagura runs into Chiyo. Chiyo seems to relate quite a bit to her rival due to the fact they both desire to win the IU for the sake of the person they care for the most. However, she should not let her ambitions distract her. From what Takuma taught her, as long as she focuses on her work, performance criteria, and uniting with her unit, she can really tap into her full potential and become the idol everyone fell in love with in the beginning. An offended Kagura brushes Chiyo aside, claiming they are nothing alike as she heads back to NAZO’s meeting spot.

As Chiyo’s unit advances past the quarterfinals and the semifinals, Yamato, feeling desperate, decides to put his ultimate plan into action. Some of his hoods soon break into Takuma’s hotel room, give him a dose of knockout drops, and kidnap him in his sleep! The next day as Chiyo arrives in her dressing room, she notices a letter on the counter. It turns out to be an ultimatum. “I have Takuma. Drop out of the IU finals and give up your idol career entirely or else your secret will be made public. I can only imagine the looks on the faces of your foolish once-loyal fans once they see this!” Attached to the letter is a picture of Chiyo and Takuma sharing a deep kiss. Chiyo is shocked and quickly informs Kenji of the situation. With little options left and absolutely zero thoughts of surrender, Kenji and Kaito set out on an investigation. Chiyo tries to stop Kenji. Takuma has been kidnapped and held hostage. There is no telling what they will do if Kenji sticks his nose where it doesn’t belong. Plus, her career and reputation are at risk. Chiyo cringes, feeling as though she is unable to do anything. However, Kenji is not willing to give up on her. He will do whatever he can to make sure she can perform for both Takuma and her fans. He is never the type to let something like this slide. Chiyo can hardly believe her ears. Kenji cares about her so much she is willing to put everything on the line for her sake. She knew she made the right decision to place her faith in her most recent (and best) producer.

As the final showdown draws nearer and nearer, the situation grows more and more bleak. However, Kaito soon overhears Yamato on the phone with the kidnappers. It appears as though is plan is progressing smoothly. He promises to pay them once Chiyo surrenders and NAZO wins the IU. Receiving information on Takuma’s whereabouts, Kaito soon asks the stage management crew about RyuuseiPro’s dressing rooms. However, none of them could point him in the right direction (they are actually working for Yamato). Fortunately, Kaito is able to find two legitimate staff members who could help him. The group waits until the coast is clear before they head to Yamato’s quarters. Once there, they hear peculiar noises in the room. Kaito opens the door and discovers Takuma tied up and gagged in a chair! Kaito pulls out a Swiss Army knife and cuts the rope binding Takuma. Takuma soon thanks them. Both of them head back to center stage just in time to tell Kenji and Chiyo the news.

With only ten minutes until curtain call, Chiyo is looking worried. Yamato mocks her, believing she is scared to face the overwhelming might of NAZO. Kenji informs Yamato that someone important to Chiyo recently got kidnapped and was just getting a little overly worried. Yamato believes it is nothing more than a childish excuse since Chiyo knows her humiliating defeat is inevitable. Kaito soon arrives with Takuma. According to a phone conversation Kaito overheard, Yamato hired men to kidnap Takuma and threaten Chiyo with the release of a scandalous photo so that she would be forced to surrender to NAZO and quit her idol career. Then he disguised other RyuuseiPro employees as stage management members in order to steer suspicious people away from Takuma. Luckily, Kaito got some assistance and were able to find and free Takuma. Chiyo is delighted and grateful to Kenji and Kaito for helping. Both Kenji and Kagura cannot believe Yamato would commit such an underhanded act. Kagura especially demands Yamato to fight fair, believing a victory via dishonest methods would only serve to soil her family’s reputation. Yamato decides to comply for Kagura’s sake. As Chiyo takes the stage, Takuma’s eyes are locked onto Chiyo, wishing to see the full results of everything she has learned up to this point in her career. It is such a familiar feeling to him…the same feeling he experienced when he fell in love with her.

ENDING

At long last, after so many long, painful years, Chiyo is finally able to fulfill her promise to Takuma. She is beyond grateful to Kenji for helping her turn her career around and experience just what it truly means to be an idol. Meeting him and getting to know his kindness and strong work ethic really helped her see producers in a new light. Working and bonding with two other idols allowed her to tap into her full potential utilizing the power of unity. She can tell her partners also learned and grew up a lot from her years of wisdom. With all her recent achievements and an experience that went above and beyond her expectations, Chiyo decides to retire as an idol so she can finally remain by Takuma’s side. Not wanting to let her talent and experience go to waste, she decides to later become a trainer in order to help shape the next generation of idols. However, she will never forget all the memories she had with Kenji. Kenji wishes her and Takuma a bright and successful future as they say their goodbyes for the last time...or is it?
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Re: The Portal of Zeta: iDOLM@STER Neo Vision
« Reply #241 on: August 25, 2014, 11:00:45 am »
The ending is a bit sad, but I like Chiyo's story anyway! Who will be next?

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Re: The Portal of Zeta: iDOLM@STER Neo Vision
« Reply #242 on: August 26, 2014, 06:24:54 am »
The ending is a bit sad

Probably because she retired. Then again, her career made a massive turnaround after it went nowhere for so long, she fulfilled her promise to Takuma, got to experience what it truly means to be an idol, and after marrying Takuma, continues to use her talents and act as a trainer for younger up-and-coming idols.

Not sure who to do next. Probably Momoko, Hikari, Reika, or (once I get just a couple more ideas) Nagisa.

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Re: The Portal of Zeta: iDOLM@STER Neo Vision
« Reply #243 on: August 26, 2014, 01:21:04 pm »
Try to write Reika's story, alright?

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Re: The Portal of Zeta: iDOLM@STER Neo Vision
« Reply #244 on: August 29, 2014, 12:49:10 am »
So it shall be!

Tsukishiro Reika’s Route

Kenji first sees Reika having lunch at a fast food restaurant a couple of blocks to the east of the ZetaPro building. It appears as though this is her first time eating a burger. The taste intrigues her. It’s much different from the filet mignon she enjoys normally, but it is still satisfying. Kenji is a bit surprised. To think he would meet someone who has never eaten a hamburger before. Then again, Reika does come from a very rich, sophisticated family, so it seems logical she might not be that familiar with more common food. As Kenji approaches Reika, she begins speaking to him in a very formal tone. Feeling a little awkward, Kenji informs her there is really no need for formalities. Reika receives the news of her debut and feels surprised, never expecting to be selected so soon. Still, she is ready and willing to serve Kenji faithfully as she begins her journey of discovery.

After Reika meets her two partners and makes her national debut, most of her time is spent with Kenji and the others getting to know the common world better. Having grown up with her father teaching her the art of classical, opera, and ballet, the world of pop music is very obscure to her. Still, she finds her new songs rather interesting. While they seem catchy and have a good danceable beat, she can almost seem to sense the feelings conveyed in her lyrics.

The next morning after Reika’s unit claims victory in their first festival, Kenji runs into Reika in a rundown alley. Several abandoned children who seem to know Reika pretty well put on a pretty, playful display for her. She gives each one of them a bit of change for their next meal, much to their thanks. She is shocked when she immediately notices Kenji right behind her. Kenji never expected to find Reika here of all places. Reika does not know why, but she can somehow feel for these children. Throughout her childhood, she was taught to always dress formally and act properly and lady-like towards everyone she meets. This little “ojou-sama” act reminds her of the pretty acts these kids put on. They seem to be all smiles for anyone with money. However, Kenji does seem to see a difference in these two acts. The children are free. Reika, however, seems to be trapped like a bird in a gilded cage. Reika berates him, saying, “At least you know where your next meal is coming from! You have no idea what it’s like to beg for leftovers!” Kenji apologizes, claiming such sadness does not become of her. Still, if there is only a way for her to break free from the cage that holds her. All of a sudden, Reika is shocked. She hears footsteps and a familiar voice. Some person is clearly looking for her. Reika quickly has to leave, but not before apologizing to Kenji and telling him she looks forward to learning new things with him in the future. Kenji soon leaves the alley as well, feeling a little concerned about Reika.

During the Sunny Beach Festival, Reika’s unit is defeated singlehandedly by Kagura. Kagura is surprised to discover her opponent’s family name—Tsukishiro. Reika must be the daughter and heir to Yutaka Tsukishiro, the famous billionaire with a passion for Europe and its history of music. Kagura cannot believe that the Reika would waste her status and talents to aid such lowlife commoners. According to Kagura, Reika lost because she was too sympathetic and weak. Her partner idols are talentless, low-class hacks who only serve to hold her back. If she really wants to become stronger and more successful, she should leave garbage like ZetaPro behind and offer her skills to larger, more sophisticated companies like RyuuseiPro. She would achieve wealth and fame beyond her wildest dreams. She would become the invincible empress she is truly capable of becoming. Kenji gets angry, telling Kagura to quit agonizing Reika and back off. Kagura leaves, but not before telling Reika to think about what she told her.

Back at the office, Reika confirms that what Kagura mentioned about Yutaka was true. Still, Reika does not believe even for a minute that her partners only burden her progress. She can tell they are talented in their own rights. If anything, she feels as though she can only blame herself because she believes she does not know nearly as much as her partners do, mainly about the outside world and appealing to the masses. Kenji and the other two idols assure Reika she is doing a fantastic job so far. Her talents and history in music have been very essential in the unit’s success so far. Besides, contrary to what Kagura told her, she is far from weak. Her status alone does not prove how skilled she really is. The unit will just have to shake off this loss and continue to play on, keeping up the good, hard work that allowed them to make it this far. Reika is not sure if ZetaPro will really become successful enough to be a match for NAZO in the future, but who knows?

(to be continued)

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Re: The Portal of Zeta: iDOLM@STER Neo Vision
« Reply #245 on: August 30, 2014, 04:22:37 am »
Tsukishiro Reika's Route, cont.

Kagura informs Yamato of her opponent. Yamato is rather interested in her. According to him, she is a fool to fall for ZetaPro’s lies. He asks Kagura to sway her over to RyuuseiPro where he can easily help her realize her full potential.

Reika’s unit manages to get its composure back and gain enough popularity to reach Rank C. After performing at a festival against 961Pro/Ryuuguu Komachi, Reika has some bad news for everyone. Unfortunately, her father has caught on to her activities and has been asked to return home. Her partners try to talk her out of it, but once her father makes his decisions, he stands by them. Almost nothing will make him turn the other cheek. If she does not come home, her father’s butlers will seek her out. As Reika sadly exits the office, the President seems to know what’s going on and comes up with an idea. He asks Kenji to pay her a visit tomorrow. Perhaps he can help work things out with her father. Kenji promises to get Reika back. She seemed so content with her new friends at ZetaPro. Besides, no bird, no matter how rare or beautiful, wants to stay cooped up in a gilded cage forever. The President gives Kenji directions to the Tsukishiro estate before the group heads home for the evening.

The next day, Kaito drives Kenji over to Reika’s mansion. The butlers ask him to leave, but Reika immediately recognizes him and asks the butlers to let him in. Reika and Kenji approach Yutaka. Yutaka is angry at Reika, figuring the President might have tempted her into working as a cash cow for him. Now he figures the President is too much of a coward to show his face to him in person so he sent his lapdog (Kenji) to do his dirty work for him. Yutaka will still not be swayed. He will not allow Reika to continue her idol career. Throughout Reika’s past, Yutaka’s interest in European music and culture got Reika into the works of famous composers such as Bach, Mozart, Beethoven, Brahms, Wagner, and Verdi. He has even taught her to sing and play the piano. Sometimes she would even give private concerts to display what she learned. One day, about three months before Reika made her debut, the President of ZetaPro overheard her singing and arrived at the Tsukishiro estate hoping to scout her as an idol. Yutaka immediately disallowed Reika from auditioning, claiming she should not be associated with the evils of the common world (such as its music). In order to protect her talents, regal beauty and happiness, Yutaka keeps Reika inside the mansion at all times. She was taught to always dress elegantly and act properly/lady-like towards visitors, which explains her rather formal conversations with Kenji and her partners. Yutaka soon asks Kenji to exit the mansion and leave Reika in peace, but Kenji stands up for himself and Reika. Yutaka claims to keep his precious bird in a gilded cage for the sake of her happiness. However, can Reika truly be happy if she is cooped up forever, even in a peaceful life of luxury? If Yutaka really does care for Reika’s happiness, he should set her free—allow her to live her life the way she wants and do what really makes her happy—allow her to get out and see the world that has been blind to her for nearly all her life. Yutaka cannot take Kenji’s shenanigans anymore and asks his butlers to escort Kenji out of the mansion. He then sends Reika to her bedroom and locks the door, asking her to use the time to get those silly idol ideas out of her head. Reika tries her best to hide her tears, but after what happened, she cannot help but cry. She then recalls what Kenji told her back in the alley…if she could only break free from the cage that holds her. Still, it seems as though her father might be hiding something…

Next week, Reika manages to escape her confines in the mansion and return to the ZetaPro building for another week of work. Kenji is glad she broke free from her cage, but the President shows a bit of concern, fearing Yutaka is still not willing to listen to Reika’s feelings.

On the day of the IU preliminary matches, Reika enters the venue looking calm and confident. She feels as though she has learned enough during her idol career to stand a chance against some of these other highly-talented competitors. Once she notices that her unit has been placed in the same competition block as NAZO, a sudden chill runs down her spine. Kagura and her partners approach Reika, believing she has not learned her lesson yet since her humiliating defeat at the Sunny Beach Festival. Perhaps this time Kagura will prove what the upper class is truly capable of, especially seeing how a nationally-renowned diva is backed up by a competitive dancing champion and a child star beauty queen. Much to Kagura’s surprise, ZetaPro is able to pass the audition, though placing a distant second to NAZO. Kagura is starting to get a little frustrated. Apparently the legacy of the Tsukishiro family is finally starting to awaken. However, according to Kagura, the fact that she still uses her skills to aid such low-life commoners still proves Reika’s weakness. It’s not too late for Reika to end her little charade and offer her talents to RyuuseiPro because if she continues along the path she is currently on, her career will go nowhere and eventually come crashing down. Reika suddenly speaks up. She is not interested in a big-name, high-paying company like RyuuseiPro. She belongs with ZetaPro. The staff and idols are very kind and caring to her. While they still work hard and take their training seriously, she feels like she can actually get satisfaction out of her work with them. She feels more like a human being than just an idol. Kagura scoffs at Reika, claiming she is a simpleminded fool who was tricked by her peers’ kindness. “Don’t you see they are only using you? They see your legacy alone as a cash cow. They are willing to milk you until you’re dry. Don’t be fooled by their lies!” She laughs as she heads out of the venue with the rest of NAZO.

(to be continued)

Stay tuned. Reika is about to realize a shocking truth in the next update.

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Re: The Portal of Zeta: iDOLM@STER Neo Vision
« Reply #246 on: September 01, 2014, 12:23:45 am »
Tsukishiro Reika's Route, cont.

On her way back to the office, Reika spots a bed of purple petunias in full bloom. As she admires them, she suddenly freezes in shock. Flashbacks of her past soon appear in her head. In one, a little girl in a raggedy one-piece dress carries around a basket full of petunias. In another, a group of pesky boys stomps on a small petunia garden, making the little girl cry. In another, the girl looks up to a strange yet familiar-looking silhouette as he appears out of the back door of a limo. Kenji catches her just as she’s about to faint. Everyone is given quite a scare. Back at the office, Reika wakes up to everyone’s relief. Kenji asks Reika what happened to give her a shock like that. Reika believes that the sight of the petunia patch she passed not too long ago sparked some horrible memories. She begins to feel a little distressed. Wishing to rest off her sadness and get the painful thoughts out of her head, she goes home for the evening. Kenji is really starting to worry about Reika. She does not normally get so stressed out like this. The President believes she might have experienced trauma in her life that she’s not willing to talk about with anybody else. It would be best just to leave her be for now. Kenji still wonders how he will be able to help Reika if he does not know what is wrong.

The next day, Reika returns to the Tsukishiro estate undetected in order to talk to Yutaka about the flashbacks she witnessed. After Reika mentions purple petunias, Yutaka gets angry as he specifically told his butlers never to plant petunias in his garden. Reika claims they did not come from their garden, but from one of the books she has read (she couldn’t bear telling him the truth…if she did, she feared she would get locked away in her room for good). Yutaka never figured he would have to do this, but seeing that Reika may begin to have suspicions after witnessing those flashbacks, he decides to come clean with her…Yutaka is not her real father. He found Reika abandoned when she was very young—around 4 or 5 years old. While Reika lived on the streets, she seemed to develop a passion for gardening and growing flowers. Petunias were her favorites because to her they always appear to be smiling at her. She would always find the best seeds she could get her hands on and the best soil they could grow in. Once they were fully grown, she would always pick them, put them in a basket, and try to sell them. Sadly, this was the only way she could make enough money to survive on the streets. Still, flowers always made her happy, so she wanted to spread the happiness she felt as she cared for them. However, not all of her flowers made it. As Yutaka was noticing Reika care for her flowers one day, he saw two bullies purposefully stomping on her little garden. Seeing such fragile lives and joys crushed, all she could do was cry. As they continued to pick on her, Reika became too scared to speak up. Then one day, no longer bearing to see the poor little girl suffer, Yutaka came along to the alley Reika resided in. As she offered him her basket to try to sell him some petunias, Yutaka instead offers her a ride in his limo, taking her underneath his wing. He then raised her like a daughter in a life of luxury in the Tsukishiro estate, erasing the memories of her painful past and sealing her away from the cold, cruel world that treated her so harshly. This is why Yutaka never allowed Reika to leave the mansion—so she would no longer have to put up with the evils of the outside world. Even so, he knew Reika loved flowers so much, so he had his butlers make a little flower garden (minus the petunias) out in his yard just for her. The only thing he cared about was her happiness. He never figured one day something would spark the memories of her past. He never wanted to tell the truth, fearing it would break her poor heart. Reika is actually happy to have the truth revealed to her. The little girl Yutaka raised from rags to riches has turned 18 and he did not even know it. Plus, now that she is aware that her flashbacks were indeed the truth, they will not bother her anymore. As Reika goes to sleep that night, Yutaka recalls what Kenji told him earlier. “If you truly care for her happiness, set your bird free from her gilded cage.” He wonders. He really does not want Reika to have to suffer again, but was Kenji correct about his statement?

When Reika returns to work, she decides to keep her truth a secret from Kenji and the others, fearing it would only burden them. Still, she spends some time with the other two idols in order to bond with them and learn even more about the outside world.

ZetaPro is challenged to a face-off against NAZO at the Harvest Moon Festival. However, the performance is cancelled due to a pyrotechnic malfunction. As Yamato approaches ZetaPro in order to mock them, he reveals that he knows Reika’s secrets. His spies heard everything during her conversation back at the mansion a few weeks back. Apparently, Reika was lying not only to her coworkers, but to the public about her life of luxury. In reality, ZetaPro just plucked a dirty little urchin off the streets and used the Tsukishiro legacy to turn her into an easy cash cow. This just proves the stupidity and gullibility of middle class companies. They would do or say anything to promote their idols. If Reika was lying about her past, what makes her unit think she was being true to them? She cannot be trusted! Imagine the scandal if word reached the public’s ear! Kenji interrupts him, claiming it was Reika’s hard work, calm attitude, and talents that helped her and her unit make it this far. The Tsukishiro name had nothing to do with it. Yamato scoffs at Kenji’s defense. He will prove the true strength of the upper class once NAZO mops the floor with ZetaPro at the IU finals—if they ever get that far. Reika has no chance because she only uses her elite aura to mask her true weakness. She is really just like her partners—common trash.

(to be continued)

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Re: The Portal of Zeta: iDOLM@STER Neo Vision
« Reply #247 on: September 01, 2014, 12:41:11 am »
Holy Plot Twists, this is good! I really feel sorry for Reika having to know the sad truth about her life. Hopefully things get better for her eventually.
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« Reply #248 on: September 01, 2014, 03:50:34 pm »
I didn't expect anything like that! I thought that Reika's father had some business with RyuuseiPro, so he "kept" Reika for them!

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« Reply #249 on: September 01, 2014, 06:56:14 pm »
I never expected Reika's little flashback/"the past is revealed" moment to generate such response! Now time to finish Reika's roller coaster ride of a story mode route.

Tsukishiro Reika's Route, conclusion

Back at the office, Reika tells her unit the truth about her past. Everyone is shocked and feels sorry for her. Now Kenji understands why Reika had those flashbacks and fainted when she noticed the petunias after the IU prelims. Still, Reika claims what Yamato said about her was wrong. She has always been taught by Yutaka to be truthful to everyone. Besides, the memories of her past were essentially wiped clean from her memory until that particular incident. Kenji agrees. Reika never even looked like the type who would lie her way out of anything. She has done spectacularly as an idol ever since her national debut. In fact, the time she spent learning music from Yutaka’s travels has been a huge contributor to her talents and success. Reika thanks everyone for all the care and support they have given her all this time. As the group adjourns for the evening, Kenji recalls what Yutaka told him during their meeting. He only meant to keep his precious little bird in his gilded cage and keep her past a secret from her so she would continue to be happy. He could not stand seeing her sad again after all she had been through fending for herself at such a tender age. While Reika seems happy now, Kenji can still feel an intense sorrow inside her. Perhaps Yutaka has not decided to free her from her cage just yet…

Meanwhile, back at the Tsukishiro estate, two of Yutaka’s butlers come into Reika’s room to check up on her only to discover she is not there. Worried, they search the entire mansion with no luck. Taking drastic measures, they call the other butlers in for a meeting. “Reika-sama is missing!” Believing she escaped again, they all decide to spread out, search every corner of the city, find Reika, and return her safely to the mansion. However, Yutaka himself has not been informed of any of this.

On the day of the IU finals opening ceremonies, Reika overhears a conversation between Kagura and Yamato. Kagura is relying on her producer to guide her to victory in the finals. Yamato knows she must win at all costs for the sake of her family honor. From what Reika heard, the Ichimonji family apparently has quite the reputation for its esteemed musical abilities, almost similar to Yutaka Tsukishiro’s reputation as a multibillionaire. Reika decides to chat with Kagura when she suddenly hears a familiar voice. It’s one of the head butlers of the Tsukishiro estate! Reika is a little worried. It sounds as though Yutaka has declared her missing and sent his butlers searching far and wide to find her and return her to the mansion. This time they are bound to make sure she stays home! Reika tells Kenji they need to escape from the venue undetected. Fortunately, the butlers do not yet know about her idol career. Reika normally does not dress up or wear her hair like this. As ZetaPro cautiously heads back to the van, they manage to slip by the search party unnoticed. As they head back to the office, Kenji appears frustrated. He cannot seem to believe Yutaka would go that far. His intentions may be good, but Reika will not be happy if he will not allow her to follow her dreams.

At Tokyo Dome, Reika’s unit defeats Jupiter in the quarterfinals and Project Fairy in the semifinals. With the tension mounting, Yamato decides to hatch his last-ditch plan to stop ZetaPro in their tracks. He has grown aware that a search party has been sent from the Tsukishiro estate in order to locate their missing heiress. Figuring they could use some help, he decides to be a “nice guy” and point them in the right direction. He has his men send a note to the Tsukishiro estate claiming they have found Reika at the Tokyo Dome and is set to perform tomorrow night. The butlers read the letter and hatch a plan to corner her. Later on, Yutaka also reads the letter. It soon got him thinking, but not the same way the butlers are thinking…

The next morning just as ZetaPro arrives at Tokyo Dome for the IU final match, Reika appears to be lost in thought. As she gradually became more and more successful as an idol, she has been thinking about what to do with her career for a while now. Sure she has been using her talents to the fullest, earning the adoration of many fans, and learning nearly everything there is to know about the outside world, but she really wants to get a little more satisfaction out of her success. Kenji hopes she will soon find that satisfaction.

Later that evening as Reika and the others are set to take the stage, the butlers suddenly storm into the dome. They are determined to take Reika away and will not let anyone or anything stand in their way. Several of Reika’s fans try to bar their path but they are easily pushed aside. Kaito warns Kenji and the others about the security breach. Reika is scared stiff. She knows this mob consists of butlers from the Tsukishiro estate who have come to take her back to the mansion. It sounds like they would go as far as to prevent her from performing in the finals. Still, she wonders how they were able to locate her so easily. The butlers finally reach the stage and manage to catch Reika, much to her unit’s dismay. Kaito tries to stop them, but he is immediately restrained. The head butler angrily grabs Kenji by the collar, accusing him of kidnapping Reika and forcing her to work as an idol. The butlers shall escort Reika back home and will inform her “father” of her defiance. Suddenly, someone is heard laughing at the incident. It’s Yamato! He knew the Tsukishiro estate’s butlers were searching for Reika and thought he could help them out. Kenji cannot believe it. He believes it was all a ruse to destroy Reika’s career and give NAZO an unfair edge in the finals. All of a sudden, a familiar voice booms, “Let them go!” Yutaka appears before his butlers. The head butler protests they have found Reika and silenced her kidnapper. Yutaka demands them to release Reika and Kenji at once. Kenji is no kidnapper. He knew Reika left of her own free will. He was thinking about the conversation he had with Kenji for a while now. All this time he thought his adoptive daughter was content with her life, but he failed to notice that she was crying on the inside. Believing ignorance was bliss (considering her past), he then apologizes to her for misunderstanding her true feelings. For the sake of her happiness, if this is really what she wants, he will allow Reika to perform tonight and continue her career as an idol. “Now get out there and show them everything this young man and I have taught you!” The butlers reluctantly let Reika and Kenji go, much to Yamato’s dismay. Yutaka then thanks Kenji for helping him see the light with a handshake. Kenji is glad he was able to set Reika free from the cage he held her in for so long. Kenji and later Kagura demand Yamato to end his shenanigans play fairly. The rest of the conversation goes on normally from there.

ENDING

Reika feels much happier now that she can spread her wings and fly freely in the sky. She has finally decided what to do to give happiness back to the community that adored her so much. She uses some of her earnings to fund for the reconstruction of a nearby orphanage. Remember those kids she saw in the alley after the White Lotus Festival? Their old home recently got demolished to make way for a brand new supermarket. Lately, she has been especially enjoying her performances in orphanages and foster homes. She really has become a glimmer of hope for people whose lives have been much less fortunate than hers. Reika especially thanks Kenji for all she has given her. Not only has he helped her see the true beauty of a world that was closed off to her for so long, but he helped convince Yutaka to release his caged bird. He probably couldn't be any more proud of her accomplishments and her efforts to aid children who suffered the same way she did so long ago.
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« Reply #250 on: September 03, 2014, 11:30:39 am »
When I read Reika's description I thought she was the second Takane, but now I'm really like Reika! Her story is the best so far! Who is next? By the way, I'm noticed that your stories lack events with the rivals (those events are what I like SP for.).

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« Reply #251 on: September 03, 2014, 06:19:31 pm »
When I read Reika's description I thought she was the second Takane, but now I'm really like Reika! Her story is the best so far! Who is next? By the way, I'm noticed that your stories lack events with the rivals (those events are what I like SP for.).

I didn't want to spoil anything huge in the description and thought I'd save it for the Story Mode rundown.

I see...then again, there is that moment after the IU finals opening ceremonies where we get to hear the true intentions of your leader's main rival and perhaps have a conversation. Remember when Jun tried to cheer up Maya after she got yelled at by Yamato? Remember Sakura's long history with Kagura?

Not sure who's next now. Momoko and Hikari are still up there. Nagisa and Hinata might follow after I add a few more things to spice up their stories. Hinata may look like a Yayoi clone, but I decided to add something extra to her usual "loli genki girl" aura--she has ADHD, which is revealed a bit later on having to put up with "ableist" haters. I wanted to prove that even "disabled" girls can be successful idols too especially since I, myself, am disabled in my own right..

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« Reply #252 on: September 05, 2014, 03:25:13 am »
Aida Momoko’s Route

Kenji first meets Momoko at the office’s cafeteria. She is singing along to her MP3 player. Kenji immediately recognizes her lyrics—relations. However, her voice is a bit off-key. Not only that, but some passersby look at her thinking, “What does she think she’s doing?” Kenji walks up to her and has to wave at her to get her attention because of her headphones. Momoko initially reacts with disgust, thinking he is just some common lovestruck boy trying to ask her out on a date. However, once she hears the news about her debut, her face lights up. Momoko is eager to display her talent and irresistible cuteness to the nation!

Momoko is a little disappointed about the President’s choice for her producer. She specifically asked for a charming young prince of a producer who would sweep her off her feet, not some nerdy-looking geek who could possibly be a hidden pervert or stalker. Plus, once Momoko meets her partners a week later, she immediately assigns herself as the unit’s leader, thinking the other two are trying to steal her spotlight. Kenji somehow manages to earn her trust…for now. Still, Kenji is wondering. Judging people based on appearance alone…a moody and self-centered demeanor…Momoko clearly shows teenage angst and naivety. Combined with her slightly below-average singing voice and seeming inability to be a team player, does she really have what it takes to be an idol?

At the debut audition, Momoko puts on quite the performance and shines much, much brighter than she did the last two weeks. Kenji and her partners are very surprised. It’s like she’s a natural at this kind of thing. “Of course it’s natural for me, silly! I am the prettiest after all! Even the judges know that!” Seeing her in such a good mood, Kenji does not really have the heart to tell her that her singing was still a bit off. Plus, her partners (depending on who they are) start to get a little fed up with her selfish attitude. Still, it’s nothing a few lessons and promotions cannot fix. Maybe she will learn in due time…

(to be continued)

I know Momoko seems a little "I really want to peg that wannabe with trash!" right now, but just wait until I get deeper into her story.

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« Reply #253 on: September 05, 2014, 01:22:03 pm »
I see...then again, there is that moment after the IU finals opening ceremonies where we get to hear the true intentions of your leader's main rival and perhaps have a conversation. Remember when Jun tried to cheer up Maya after she got yelled at by Yamato? Remember Sakura's long history with Kagura?

Of course I do, but it's not enough! Kagura and Himeko seem monsters for me before that "after the IU finals opening ceremonies" event!

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« Reply #254 on: September 05, 2014, 06:34:55 pm »
Of course I do, but it's not enough! Kagura and Himeko seem monsters for me before that "after the IU finals opening ceremonies" event!

Oh dear...now I'm starting to wonder if my delivery for NAZO was pretty weak after all. Then again, I haven't seen many of the rival interactions in SP. I know there wasn't much out-of-story-event interaction with Jupiter in iM@S2 (aside from Touma). I kind of wanted to have NAZO's harsh attitude towards ZetaPro a mystery until the truth about their rival is revealed (how NAZO's producer is Kenji's long-time rival and the President's spoiled, corrupted son who has declared war against his father's company to prove the true strength of money, the upper class, and big businesses). Then at the IU finals opening ceremonies, we discover the rival idol's true intentions, which were either meant to justify their "I must win no matter what"/"I won't lose to low-lives like you" approach or just to prove how much of a stick-in-the-butt Yamato is.

Maybe I could add some what-if scenarios in the future...like what would happen if Karen came across Kagura (considering their VAs in a certain spin-off anime)? Hmm? ;)

Anyway, stay tuned for another piece of Momoko's route later on today! (I go by the Pacific time zone, so subtract 9 hours from this forum's time).