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Re: The Portal of Zeta: iDOLM@STER Neo Vision
« Reply #225 on: July 28, 2014, 05:44:00 am »
Sorry for the delay, everyone. San Diego Comic-con, street pass mania, and Super Smash Bros. demos got in the way over the weekend.
Wow, look how many views I'm getting! I'm surprised! Makes me wonder who comes along to read my stories sometimes.

Igarashi Yoshino's Route, cont.

A few days after the White Lotus Festival, Kenji gets a call from Yoshino on a cloudy day. Her mother is delayed because of work so Yoshino wants him to see her home from school. With some extra time on his hands, Kenji decides to swing by and help her out. Once he arrives, he is greeted and thanked sincerely by Yoshino. She even shows Kenji her recent test scores—two perfect scores on a day with two big exams, outscoring all of her classes. Kenji is amazed and congratulates Yoshino for a job well done. According to her parents, Yoshino has an IQ of 198, just short of reaching the “unmeasurable genius” level. She’s often the top performer among her class in exams and is the envy of even academically exceptional upperclassmen. She was given several offers to skip grades, but Yoshino often declined, preferring to remain with her close friends. Many students would kill to have her as a study partner, whether their reasons are honest or not. Even Kenji feels a bit jealous of Yoshino’s accomplishments. With all that childlike energy and playfulness she exerts on a daily basis, Kenji never figured her to be a studious genius. Still, even at her age, Yoshino is still not too confident going home by herself. While she easily knows the way back home, she’s often an easy target by bullies. Some misinterpret her academic success and personality, saying she’s a braggart and acts all high and mighty because of her intelligence. Some mock her nerdy looks and say she “dates her textbooks.” Others just torment her for her bad vision, as she normally cannot see a thing without her glasses. Some classmates even go so low as to trick her into doing their homework, taking advantage of her intellect and excellent academic performances. Kenji promises to do everything in his power to keep her safe not because it’s his job as her producer, but because it’s just the right thing to do. He also gives her an extra glass cleaner to place in her bag at all times. It will serve as a backup lest she forget to bring her own. Yoshino thanks Kenji as they head for home. During their walk, it suddenly starts to rain. The rain quickly intensifies into a downpour. Kenji and Yoshino are not prepared for this sudden change in weather (they did not bring umbrellas), especially since the forecast mentioned there would hardly be any chance of rain despite the heavy cloud cover. Kenji takes Yoshino to find some cover while Yoshino covers her head with her bag. Yoshino trips over a crack in the sidewalk and almost falls, but Kenji is there to immediately catch her. As they finally find shelter underneath the canopy of a nearby library, Yoshino calls her mother on her cell phone, tells her about the sudden rainfall, and informs her of her current location so she can pick her up once she’s done with work. As she is about to hang up, Kenji notices something a little amiss about Yoshino. The rain not only made her shirt all wet…but it also “exposed” the fact that Yoshino is not wearing a bra! Kenji quickly looks away upon seeing through Yoshino’s wet shirt (though the player cannot see the whole thing…remember this isn’t an R18 game). A shocked Yoshino covers her chest in sheer embarrassment. She was certain she put on a bra this morning, but in a slight rush to get dressed and eat breakfast, she must have forgotten. Kenji lets Yoshino use his sweater to “cover up” and keep warm until her mother gets back. Yoshino admits that while she may be a genius, she might sometimes have clumsy moments and forget about the fundamentals. While waiting for her mother to arrive, she decides to use her time to study for her classes. Minutes later, Yoshino’s ride arrives. She thanks Kenji for the time they were able to spend together despite the sudden change in weather. She also thanks him for letting her borrow his sweater after her little mistake was “exposed.” Kenji allows her to keep using the sweater so that she can remain “covered” until she gets back home, but he wants it back next time they meet again. With the rain still falling, he phones Kaito to drive him back home.

Later on the next work day, Yoshino gives Kenji back his sweater. Her mother even got it washed, ironed, and everything. Kenji thanks her for returning the sweater. After the President wonders what's going on, Kenji tells him about the recent downpour when he is suddenly interrupted by Yoshino, not wanting the President to know about her little mistake.

Yoshino is really starting to enjoy performing at festivals. While they do have a lot of fun activities, Kenji still has to remind her that she and her unit are there to perform. She is very excited to be able to attend the Sunny Beach Festival. She has been there a few times in the past, but she has focused so much on the games that she almost forgot about the numerous idol concerts held there annually. Even after getting a glimpse of her opponent (which happens to be NAZO idol Maya), she’s still willing to go all-out and make the whole crowd go wild, especially the people who gotten to know her well over time. While firing her unit up, she still look a bit concerned, almost as if she’s hiding something more. Unfortunately, Yoshino’s unit gets singlehandedly defeated by Maya. On Yoshino’s way downstairs, she trips on the last step and falls down as her glasses fly off her head again. Luckily, she is not hurt, but with her vision fuzzy again, she immediately feels around the ground to find her glasses. Maya happens to come along, find the glasses, and give them back to her, assuming them to be hers considering the situation she was in. Yoshino puts her glasses back on, gets on her feet, and thanks Maya for the help. Maya is just glad that she is all right after taking a fall like that. Still, Maya is a little disappointed from the lack of competition. Yoshino feels a little upset upon hearing that, but Maya tells her not to worry. While Yoshino may be young and inexperienced, as long as remains diligent in her lessons and continues to fight hard for what she believes in, she will really have the potential to become an amazing idol. If they meet again, Maya expects Yoshino to improve quite a bit. With that, she heads off.

Back at the office, Kenji, the President, and the other two idols notice that Yoshino has been looking a little down. She has been thinking about what Maya told her and fears she just is not nearly as talented as her partners. Compared to them, all Yoshino has in terms of talent is very little experience with karaoke nights at restaurants and rhythm/dance games at the arcade. Then there is her bad sight and clumsy tendencies. Still, she really wants to push herself hard to become a better idol even though she might not ultimately succeed. Kenji and the others really admire Yoshino’s drive. Besides, Yoshino constantly studies her songs and dance routines just as efficiently as she does her textbooks. Because of this, she is usually the first to perform her song consistently after learning it. This skill has really become a major asset to the unit’s growing success. Plus, her bad eyesight and clumsy tendencies have never burdened the unit at all. Yoshino feels better and thanks everyone for their support. She can tell everyone at ZetaPro truly cares about her. While the unit is still a little shaken up from their crushing defeat to Maya, Yoshino really helps brighten up the atmosphere around ZetaPro once again.

(to be continued)
« Last Edit: July 28, 2014, 08:29:41 pm by ZetaFlare »

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Re: The Portal of Zeta: iDOLM@STER Neo Vision
« Reply #226 on: July 28, 2014, 04:16:10 pm »
It was me who voted for Yoshino!
A funny fact: Iori-Master (who is voiced by Yukari Tamura) and Yayoi-Master (who is voiced by Ami Koshimizu) can't stand each other, but Yoshino and Maya are future friends! Oh, these seiyuu connections~! :)

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Re: The Portal of Zeta: iDOLM@STER Neo Vision
« Reply #227 on: July 31, 2014, 08:00:13 am »
Sorry about the slow pace. I'm getting tied up with another more important project.

Igarashi Yoshino's Route, cont.

Despite a few slip-ups, trips, and “lost glasses” moments, Yoshino really helps her unit back on track. Once she reaches Rank C, if her opponent is Ryuuguu Komachi, she will accidentally bump into Ritsuko while cleaning her glasses. Wondering what she ran into, Yoshino puts her glasses back on and, noticing Ritsuko, immediately apologizes for the accident. Ritsuko does not seem to mind, figuring Yoshino would be the type who cannot see very well without her glasses. Ritsuko is soon very intrigued about Yoshino’s behavior. Originally she considered her a more introverted type of meganekko after her little accident and apology, but she found her added loli-like playfulness, happiness, and innocence pretty unique among other meganekko idols. Ritsuko then tells Yoshino if she utilizes both of her moe aspects effectively, she can really become a special idol unlike any she’s ever seen before.

A few days after the events of the Black Pearl/Fujisan Rock Festival, Yoshino is scheduled to perform in another solo concert. Just as soon as she finishes, however, she trips over her and falls flat on her face, dropping her glasses in the process. Luckily, she is able to hear exactly where they dropped, quickly picks them up and puts them back on. The audience just laughs and cheers as she exits the stage. Later, Kenji congratulates her on another successful performance. Yoshino, however, is a bit disappointed from tripping up again. She is starting to worry that she is becoming a nuisance to her partners and Kenji because of her bad vision all her clumsy moments. She is doing her very best to avert her little problem, but no matter how hard she tries, something always seems to happen. Kenji reminds Yoshino not to worry at all. He knows she is trying her level best. She is not a nuisance at all. In fact, she has established herself as the unit’s mood maker due to her bubbly personality. Plus, he can tell she practices just as hard as she studies and her talents are constantly improving every day. Yoshino is glad to hear Kenji’s praise and support. She figures now might be a good time to tell him the truth about her concerns, no longer worried that they will wind up being a burden to the unit. It turns out Yoshino never had the best vision in the world even just after birth. At a very young age, she contracted a form of blindness that starts off light but worsens over time. She must wear prescription glasses to make up for her blurry vision. If her eyesight is not treated by the time she reaches her mid-teens, it will mature into complete blindness. Unfortunately, the cost for an eye operation is expensive and her parents are not making nearly enough money with their current jobs combined to compensate. With time running short, Yoshino decided to pitch in herself and decided to become an idol in order to help her raise enough money for her operation. She really wanted her work to be fun. Plus, she wanted to play around and have as much fun as she can while she still has her vision. Idols get to do all sorts of fun activities and the job pays very nicely. With a bit of karaoke and rhythm game experience under her belt, she auditioned with four record companies (one of them being RyuuseiPro) only to get turned down every time. Yoshino was almost about to give up hope until her parents read through the local newspaper and noticed another company that was holding auditions and looking for new idols—ZetaPro. This time her audition was successful. The President loved her constant happiness and saw potential for even greater talent. Today, Yoshino is doing a pretty good job building her finances as well as her popularity, but she still feels as though she has a ways to go before she can accomplish her goals. Kenji is willing to do anything in his power to help her see to it that Yoshino gets her eye operation. According to him, she has been doing very well since her debut. As long as she continues to persevere, her skills and popularity will continue to rise. Yoshino thanks Kenji for sticking up to her. While her goal for the future is very important, she will not let it make her worried about the present. Being an idol really is fun for her.

(to be continued)

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Re: The Portal of Zeta: iDOLM@STER Neo Vision
« Reply #228 on: August 02, 2014, 11:58:56 pm »
Igarashi Yoshino's Route, cont.

Yoshino’s conversation did not go unnoticed. Yamato’s spies have been eavesdropping and immediately send their hot scoop to gossip columnists. Magazine articles made it look like Yoshino only became an idol for money and personal goals. To them, she cares more about her eyes than her fans. Fortunately, this false, selfish image does not interfere with Yoshino’s progress, happiness, and growing fan base.

Once the IU preliminaries roll around, Yoshino suddenly starts to worry. She pretty much knows Maya will be competing in a tournament this big. Yoshino believes if she wants to remain popular and earn more money for her operation, she will have to perform at Maya’s level, but she still feels as though Maya is still way out of her league. Her confidence diminishes further upon realizing that ZetaPro has been placed in the same competition block as NAZO. As Maya approaches Yoshino, she appears pleased to see her again. She listened to some of Yoshino’s newest songs and performances and can tell her skills have really improved quite a bit since their last encounter. Maya is really looking forward to face Yoshino’s unit and wishes them not to hold anything back, especially since she and the rest of NAZO will be coming at them at full force without any intent of losing. Kagura and Himeko soon show up, looking a little disappointed with Maya. She is talking to a selfish wannabe who only cares about the money. Yoshino is the enemy. ZetaPro is the enemy. NAZO’s purpose is to mercilessly teach their enemies the error of their ways. Kagura and Himeko soon head out to practice. Maya soon follows them after telling Yoshino to do her best. After the audition, NAZO’s members (aside from Maya) are surprised to discover that ZetaPro passed the audition by placing second in the block. However, the gap between first and second place is still immense. As Maya approaches Yoshino again, she congratulates her on a job well done. Yoshino really is becoming the idol Maya believed she could be. Even though there is still a major difference in their ability levels, Maya continues to urge Yoshino to keep pressing on and becoming stronger until they meet again, which she believes will be pretty soon. Suddenly, Kagura and Himeko show up even angrier at Maya than before. Kagura soon turns hostile towards Yoshino. According to her, she is far from idol material. She’s only a talentless, nerdy bookworm that ZetaPro plucked from the darkest corner of the library and bribed to become an idol. It is a real shame that someone like her could become this popular. Rather than living life in the present, Yoshino follows foolish dreams that will likely never come true. These dreams have only served to burden her unit. NAZO is not held back by such pitiful beliefs and always focus on completing all tasks and destroying all enemies as they come. Kagura claims Yoshino should just quit while she’s ahead because the way things are right now, NAZO will always be one step ahead of ZetaPro and Yoshino will never be able to earn enough to cure her eyesight. If she’s blind to reality, she should just go blind. Not knowing what to say, Yoshino falls to her knees in tears. Kagura laughs as NAZO heads back to Yamato’s limo while Maya worriedly looks back to Yoshino.

Back at the office, Yoshino still feels miserable. She still thinks she has really been holding her unit back. Kenji tells her not to let what Kagura told her get into her head. Sometimes chasing your dreams really can make you that much stronger. Besides, how could she be a burden to the unit if she helped lead them to pass her audition and advance to the next leg of the IU? However, considering Yoshino’s recent problems, Kenji figures out how she might be able to become even better than before. Focusing on how to catch up to NAZO, rise in popularity, and earn more money may have blinded her from her true intentions. Besides hoping to have her eye operation, why did Yoshino become an idol in the first place? She wanted work to be fun. Isn’t being an idol fun for her? Does she really enjoy all the lessons, performances, and promotions she participates in? If Yoshino really does enjoy what she does, so will her fans. Kenji suggests that Yoshino might want to focus less on her worsening eyesight and more about just being an idol. As Kenji eyed Yoshino’s progress, he has noticed kind of a special skill of hers beginning to awaken. She really seems to study new songs as hard as her schoolwork. Because of that, she is able to learn her lyrics, expressions, and dance routines by memory much more quickly than others. Her academic genius has been carrying over to her idol career. Yoshino dries her eyes and cheers up while hearing Kenji’s inspirational words. She admits she really has been too focused on competing with NAZO that she had forgotten all the joy that comes with being an idol. As for her special skill, she never really thought of it that way before. Maybe that could become an asset to the unit in the future. Yoshino thanks Kenji for the inspiration and promises to have fun and do her best in the future for herself, her partners, her fans, and Kenji.

Some of the other idols may ask Yoshino for some help nailing a few parts they miss from time to time. Yoshino is happy to help. This allows the unit to bond a bit more.

Once ZetaPro receives a writ of challenge from NAZO to appear at the Harvest Moon Festival, Yoshino feels ready to take them on this time around. Unfortunately, the performance is cancelled due to a pyrotechnic malfunction. Yoshino trips and falls down as she heads down as she exits the stage. Luckily she was far away from the flames, but her glasses fell off again. Kenji immediately finds them, gives them to Yoshino, and helps her back up, much to her thanks. All of a sudden, Yamato shows up to pick up NAZO and spoil the mood for ZetaPro. According to him, hiring Yoshino was one of ZetaPro’s biggest mistakes and shows how low the depths of common-class companies will sink. Despite Yoshino’s bad eyesight, ZetaPro just plucked a bookworm from the textbooks she essentially “dates.” They wanted to sell via a meganekko’s moe factor rather than talent. In short, she’s just a total nerd and is a disgrace to meganekko idols everywhere. Kenji grows sick of Yamato’s prejudice and immediately defends Yoshino, claiming he is just too ignorant to accept her ever-growing popularity. Sure many fans love her adorableness (some even say her occasional clumsiness has somewhat added to her moe factor), but she really does have talent and it’s really beginning to show. Yamato scoffs at Kenji’s defense, claiming that the filthy tactics of the middle class have made his rival soft. Yamato makes sure he will teach him the error of ZetaPro’s ways once and for all once NAZO completely destroys Yoshino’s unit. As Yamato leaves, Yoshino thanks Kenji for backing him up although she was not fazed in the slightest from Yamato’s insults.

(to be continued)

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Re: The Portal of Zeta: iDOLM@STER Neo Vision
« Reply #229 on: August 04, 2014, 12:00:06 am »
Igarashi Yoshino's Route, conclusion

Later on the day of the IU final opening ceremonies, Yoshino overhears a conversation between Maya and Yamato. Maya claims she has seen a significant improvement in Yoshino’s abilities since the IU preliminaries and looks forward to facing her in the final stretch of the tournament. It would be wise for NAZO not to underestimate her. Yamato is angered by her statement. Being around Yoshino has made her soft. ZetaPro is the enemy. They hire hacks like Yoshino into the idol industry. If Maya really wants to master her dancing styles, she has to have the drive to be the very best…to win by any means necessary…to destroy all enemies. He really doesn’t want to have to fire her after she was able to use her earnings to settle in a nice quiet home away from her old crime-infested slum of a neighborhood full of sorrowful memories. Maya, starting to cry, apologizes and promises him she will win the IU. Yoshino can hardly believe what she heard. Maya turned away from the competitive dance circuit and became an idol in order to raise money to achieve her goals. It sounds somewhat familiar to her. Yoshino approaches Maya with a bright smile, asking her to cheer up. Yoshino finds it so odd they have similar goals. Contrary to what the gossipers say, she tells Maya she became an idol in order to raise money for an eye operation. This is why she currently wears glasses—her vision is terrible and gradually getting worse. If not treated soon, it would eventually mature into full-on blindness. Maya is surprised. She figured all that talk about Yoshino being greedy and selfish was a lie, but she never thought the truth would be this heartbreaking. Still, Maya claims she cannot afford to hold anything back at the finals especially if they happen to square off. All she can do is wish Yoshino the best of luck and tell her to go all-out against every opponent she faces. Maya really believes Yoshino’s unit has come so far over time and it is really starting to show. As Kagura and Himeko call Maya back to Yamato’s limo, she tells Yoshino, “May the best idol win.” Yoshino is worried that a victory might crush Maya’s dreams, but Kenji tells her that should not hold her back in the slightest. ZetaPro still has to put an end to Yamato’s madness.

The quarterfinal and semifinal matches go on regularly from there. (the following event only occurs if you faced Ryuuguu Komachi after reaching Rank C) That night as Ritsuko arrives during Iori’s chat with Kenji, she walks up to Yoshino. Ritsuko has also been watching Yoshino’s recent accomplishments and has been very impressed by her progress. Ever since she saw her at the Fujisan Rock Festival, she could tell she had a unique aura that could make for a very special idol in the future. It seems as though Ritsuko’s prediction was correct. Ryuuguu Komachi may be out of the running for the IU this year, but Ritsuko and the others will be cheering for Yoshino’s unit. Sure the showdown between tiger and dragon (Kenji and Yamato) could have been destined, but if there is anyone who can match wits with NAZO now, it would be Yoshino and her unique aura that makes her so special among fellow meganekko idols.

The very next morning, Yamato, getting desperate, decides to hatch a final plan that would crush ZetaPro once and for all. As Yoshino is dressing up for the performance, one of Yamato’s hoods (disguised as a staff member) takes Yoshino’s glasses from under her nose, throws them to the ground, and stomps on them, shattering them to pieces. Helpless without her glasses, Yoshino has no idea what is going on until her partners arrive and tell her about her broken glasses. Yoshino is devastated. The unit then heads backstage to tell Kenji the news. At first, Kenji thinks she just fell down and dropped her glasses again, but she tells him she had them off while she was getting dressed when she suddenly heard them break. Kenji really does not want to scratch Yoshino from the performance so he asks her if she could call her parents and send her a backup pair. Unfortunately, it turns out her parents do not currently have spare glasses on them. Even worse, their home is quite far from Tokyo Dome anyway and they do not have the time or gas to make the trip there and back, especially considering the traffic. Just as the situation looks bleak, Yoshino takes a stand and decides to perform in the finals without her glasses, much to her partners’ surprise. Everyone but Kenji seems to disagree with that idea, claiming it’s just too dangerous with her poor eyesight. Yoshino understands the risks, but over her career, Kenji told her she seemed to have begun to display a very special talent that carried over from her textbooks to the stage. Her ability to study and memorize her stage positions, movements, poses, and lyrics very quickly has really allowed her to become a strong leader and study partner among the trio. Considering the current situation, perhaps this skill will really start to shine even without using her glasses. Kenji claims she is correct. Besides, Yoshino is so vital to the unit. Without her, it might as well not exist. Yoshino agrees and asks her partners to consider her offer. They object a little at first and Kaito believes Kenji and Yoshino have gone crazy, but soon think it would not be such a bad idea after all. Over time, they have learned to trust Yoshino’s instincts.

With her vision very fuzzy, Yoshino holds hands with her partners as they guide her to the stage. As ZetaPro is approached by NAZO, Yamato proceeds to make fun of Yoshino’s predicament, claiming she should just drop out while she has the chance. Yoshino ignores his taunting and boldly declares she will perform. Yamato can’t believe his ears. Has Yoshino really gone crazy? Is his father really this desperate to win that he would put his idols in danger? What if she trips over something? What if she gets hospitalized? What if her idol image is nothing without her glasses? Concerned, Kenji wonders how Yamato knows about her broken glasses. Yamato claims he just heard it through the grapevine that one of the staff members deliberately crushed Yoshino’s glasses. Suddenly, Maya takes a stand. Earlier in the morning, she overheard Yamato talking to a woman on the phone about glasses and how “the job was done.” He then praised the woman for her good work and promised to pay her after NAZO wins the IU. Kenji is furious with Yamato. To think the rival he once respected would take advantage of Yoshino’s bad eyesight in order to give NAZO an unfair edge. Maya then demands Yamato to quit his dirty antics and fight fair. An underhanded victory like that would be empty to her. She wishes to face Yoshino’s unit at their full strength. Yoshino thanks Maya for standing up to her. The chat goes on from there. At the final performance, Yoshino’s partners guide her to her proper position on stage. Rather than seeing with her eyes, she sees with her mind. She makes everything look like clockwork!

ENDING

One week after claiming victory at the IU, Yoshino returns to Kenji with a different pair of glasses. From a combination of her paychecks and sales, she is able to finally earn enough to receive her eye operation, which will take place a week from today! Sadly, the process will take a long time…it will take about one month after the operation until the bandages come off. Kenji congratulates her for accomplishing her dreams. Yoshino, however, thanks Kenji for all his guidance, especially helping her awaken a talent she never knew she had. Kenji asks what she will do once her eyes are cured. Yoshino claims that even though she is able to realize her ambitions, her time with Kenji and the others and seeing the happiness of her fans helped her realize just how much fun being an idol really is. Because of all that, she decides to continue her career. However, she recently came up with a pretty creative idea. Since her fans know her for being a meganekko idol, she will wear frames on stage, during photoshoots, during commercials, etc. Kenji really likes that idea, though he will miss the times when she wore real glasses. Yoshino laughs, hugs Kenji, then heads home, looking forward to the day where she will soon see the world in a new light.
« Last Edit: September 25, 2014, 07:21:50 pm by ZetaFlare »

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« Reply #230 on: August 10, 2014, 11:35:29 pm »
Ten down! I have decided to do Nozomi next as I've pretty much got her story completely mapped out.

Uemura Nozomi’s Route

Kenji first meets Nozomi honing her singing voice in one of the practice rooms. He can tell right away she possesses extraordinary talent. However, she suddenly stops, claiming a couple of her notes came out slightly flat. She feels a bit disappointed as this is normally not a difficult part of the song for her, so she decides to go back and sing the part over and over again until it is perfect. Kenji is surprised. He though Nozomi sounded perfect at that part. It seems as though he has a tough task ahead of him. Knowing this girl has such incredible singing skill and the ability to point out even the slightest mistakes, he can tell her standards will be set very high, even for her producer. Kenji knocks on the door to get Nozomi’s attention. Wishing to use her time to practice rather than chat, Nozomi is about to ask Kenji to leave until he informs her about her upcoming debut. Nozomi is happy to hear the news. At long last, she will soon prove her skills to the nation and make her dreams come true.

As soon as Nozomi receives the news that she will be the leader of an idol trio, she does not seem to mind at all. However, depending on who her partners are, she may have her doubts. Nozomi is very serious about her work and has a no-nonsense attitude. Because she has no time for fooling around, she believes some of the more upbeat girls (especially Emi) will be a nuisance and will only hinder her progress. Nozomi expects her partners to stay focused at all times and give their all in their performances. She expects the same from Kenji too. If he is going to be the one in charge of her career, he has to take responsibility. Kenji promises he will do everything in his power to help Nozomi and the others succeed, but is worried she may be setting the bar too high for the others…

(to be continued)

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« Reply #231 on: August 10, 2014, 11:42:50 pm »
My first impression is that Nozomi is like a mix of Chihaya and Ritsuko.

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« Reply #232 on: August 11, 2014, 12:21:53 am »
Finally got around to reading all these.

I had forgotten how much I loved your characters. Yoshino is so unique! It's not every day you see an upbeat meganekko. I really love her. She's becoming a fast favorite of mine. :3


ONWARDS, AOSHIMA!!!

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« Reply #233 on: August 13, 2014, 05:53:34 am »
Uemura Nozomi's Route, cont.

After Nozomi makes her national debut and begins her activities as a full-fledged idol, she is surprised to discover there is more to being an idol than meets the eye. It’s more than just singing and dancing on stage—idols are heavily diverse in the entertainment industry. Nozomi has to get used to doing photoshoots (particularly in a swimsuit), advertising for commercials, hosting or participating in variety shows, meeting and greeting fans and signing autographs after concerts, etc. Plus, her knowledge in pop music is very limited as she has spent most of her studies in classical and choral music. However, she is a very fast learner and manages to really get the job done. Once her unit reaches Rank E and defeats 876Pro in their first festival, Kenji is really impressed by not only her vocal talents, but her leadership skills. It’s almost like she’s a natural for this sort of thing. Nozomi is not too surprised, though. Over the years, several of her peers have claimed she was born to be a leader. She was appointed the student president of her choir clubs during her junior high (second and third years) and high school (second half of her first year and all of her second year) years. Outside choir, her classmates tend to turn to her for assistance and support, often putting her in charge of class assignments. However, she often declines offers to be a study buddy, preferring to study under her own standards, whether it be music or academics. Last year, she was even given an offer to run for student council president of her high school, but decided to turn it down in favor of her music studies. Even after she passed her audition with ZetaPro on her first try, she was often put in charge of teaching the other idol candidates during lessons. Many of her peers and even adults have profited from Nozomi’s guidance. Nozomi promises to be just as reliable leading her idol unit. Kenji is really proud of her for all she has to offer to the unit, but still reminds her that he is in charge of her career. Nozomi understands, but she asks Kenji to make sure she makes absolutely no mistakes and he pulls as much weight as she does, if not even more. Kenji makes a promise to Nozomi to live up to her expectations. It will be a tall order, but Kenji knows he must do it for her sake.

On the day of the Sunny Beach Festival, Nozomi feels confident she and her unit have the skills to defeat 765Pro. Even with a sudden change in opponents (who turns out to be Kagura), Nozomi is not shaken in the slightest. Despite putting her all into the performance, Kagura completely mops the floor with ZetaPro. She cannot help but laugh at the weakness of Nozomi’s unit. She did not even have to put in any effort to walk away with an easy victory. Kagura then leaves, telling Nozomi that while she may be skilled in her own right, a chain is only as strong as its weakest link. Nozomi is so frustrated she is not even willing to utter a word to anyone else. As ZetaPro drives back to the office, Kenji grows more and more worried about her.

Back at the office, Nozomi releases her pent-up frustration, blaming her loss on the incompetence of her partners as well as Kenji. It does not even matter to her that her opponent was a nationally-acclaimed diva from a trio of juggernaut idols sweeping the nation. To Nozomi, her partners lack discipline. They have been lax in their practicing (as in they have not been training as diligently as Nozomi). They do not know the importance of their jobs. They seem to stray away from her advice. This is why the unit as a whole is still unable to perform at a professional level. Kenji tries to calm Nozomi down, claiming she should not let one mere loss get in her way, but Nozomi quickly silences him. To her, Kenji is hopelessly flawed as a leader. If he truly is a leader of her standards, the unit would be able to perform flawlessly, manage their time more efficiently, be much more successful in general, and would not have lost to Kagura. If he cannot live up to her expectations, she will no longer acknowledge him as her producer. To make sure something like this does not happen again, Nozomi declares that she will take charge of the unit. Lessons will be more frequent and more diligent to make sure each and every performance is flawless. She also greatly requires 60-minute practicing every non-work day from the other two idols so that their technique will never get sloppy. As idols, they should be performers, even when off stage or work. The other two idols, no matter who they might be, are a little distraught to have such rough sanctions placed upon them. Kenji tries to interrupt, but to no avail. It appears as though nothing he says will make Nozomi reconsider. Kenji and the President start to worry about Nozomi, believing she may be taking things too far and is not considering the feelings of her partners.

As Kagura tells Yamato the news about her most recent victory, she can pretty much tell from her hidden frustration that Nozomi is about to snap. With this news, Yamato feels pretty much assured that ZetaPro is no longer a threat and victory is all but in the bag.

Over the next few weeks, despite the unit getting their groove back after a couple of successful outings, Nozomi continues to work her unit to the bone to make sure they continue to put on perfect performances. The President has to remind Nozomi that Kenji is still the one in charge of managing their work, but she often keeps the other two around after being dismissed for the evening to put in some extra practice time, much to her partners’ dismay. One day, Kenji arrives early. He really wants to know what is troubling Nozomi, so he asks the President to set aside some conversation time for the two of them. Later that evening, Nozomi tries to set aside some extra practice time for her partners, but the President calls it off, letting them go home for the evening. Nozomi tries to object, but the President insists, claiming Kenji is getting worried about her and really wants to have a chat with her. Nozomi complies and notices Kenji sitting on a bench just outside the main entrance. Kenji has been very concerned with how Nozomi is trying to run the unit. Her partners are clearly starting to show signs of fatigue from all that extra practice. Kenji fears if this keeps up, things will eventually begin to worsen rather than get better. He knows Nozomi has good intentions, but he wonders what she is really thinking. What does she really plan to get out of all this? Nozomi decides to tell the truth behind her reasons. All her life has been devoted to music. Nozomi has established herself as a singing prodigy ever since she was a child. She was a standout student in her elementary school music classes. Her voice was much more refined than other kids her age. She was invited to the school choir at the age of 8, becoming one of its youngest members. She was involved in all her schools’ choir clubs since then to continue to hone her abilities. Over the years, she has landed several solo parts in group songs and even solo performances. She has also aided other choir members with her uncanny ability to spot even the slightest flaw in a performance, even in her own. All of Nozomi’s choir teachers and private instructors have praised her for her incredible skill. When she’s not studying for classes, practicing her performance repertoire, or honing her voice, she reads books on classical music and composers, hoping to attain more knowledge of the great names, songs, and music styles of the past. Because of all the praise Nozomi received as a singer and a leader, she keeps setting her own standards higher and higher. She knows she is great, but wants to become even better. She felt as though she had to be absolutely perfect in order to consider her performances successful. Going into her final year of high school, her ultimate goal is to be able to study in an esteemed music conservatory after she graduates. Her first choice is Juilliard School in New York City. She heard about it from a pamphlet given to her by her high school’s choir director who believed a place like that would be perfect for someone of her level. However, she is well aware of any conservatory’s low acceptance rate (Juilliard’s is 7.2%). This is why Nozomi decided to become an idol. She wanted to prove to the nation (as well as the conservatories) that she has what it takes to be accepted into a conservatory and really take her musical career to the next level. Kenji is really proud that Nozomi cares deeply about her talents and wants to use them to the fullest. However, he believes perfection should not be everything. Her intolerance for mistakes has made her partners push harder than they should. The other two idols do not need to practice as much as she does in order to be able to perform at her level. Being a musician himself, Kenji knows from experience that no performance is perfect. The real trick is to be able to recover gracefully and keep pressing on. The only way the audience will be able to tell if a mistake was made is if it really sticks out. In other words, Nozomi should not make a big deal about it. It usually comes down to the satisfaction of the audience. If they are happy, the performer is happy. Nozomi later apologizes to Kenji for snapping at him and trying to be a control freak. Ever since she lost to Kagura, Nozomi felt as though she had to take over so that the unit will perform to her standards and be able to defeat her in their next encounter. Kenji thinks it would be best for Nozomi to cancel the extra practice time after work and on off-work days unless it is absolutely necessary. Not everyone needs to practice every day in order to maintain their skills. Plus, she should not feel like she has to run the whole show. It will put too much pressure on everyone, especially herself. Finally, like he said before, perfection is not everything. Nozomi thanks Kenji for an insightful chat and promises she will be a better leader from now on. Once again, she is willing to work with Kenji in charge as her producer. With that, the two of them part for the evening.

(to be continued)

My first impression is that Nozomi is like a mix of Chihaya and Ritsuko.

Yeah, I compared her personality exactly the same way (especially if you look back on the character description on the first page). But she does have her reasons, considering her past success and future goals.

Finally got around to reading all these.

I had forgotten how much I loved your characters. Yoshino is so unique! It's not every day you see an upbeat meganekko. I really love her. She's becoming a fast favorite of mine. :3

I'm glad you like Yoshino. I really wanted to make her unique among meganekko girls while adding some more common meganekko elements (i.e. her bursts of happiness leading to clumsy moments). Something tells me she might become the most popular of my loli trio.

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« Reply #234 on: August 15, 2014, 05:13:03 am »
Uemura Nozomi's route, cont.

When the President suggests entering the upcoming IU preliminaries, Nozomi immediately jumps on the opportunity, thinking it would be an excellent way to display the unit’s true capabilities to the nation. As the weeks go by, while Nozomi has not set up extra practice late after work, she still works her unit hard so they will be prepared for the IU and their next encounter with Kagura. However, the more progress she makes, the further the talent gap between her and her partners widens. Nozomi gets more and more stressed as the preliminary auditions inch closer and closer, fearing the other two idols lack focus and cannot seem to keep up. Reminding them what Kagura told them about how a chain is only as strong as its weakest link, Nozomi pushes her partners to work harder. A deeply worried Kenji can almost feel as though Nozomi seems desperate to catch up to NAZO.

The day of the IU preliminaries arrives. Nozomi has been training and rehearsing her tail off all week to prepare for this day. She knows a lot of highly skilled big-name idols and units like NAZO will be participating in a tournament this big. She keeps urging herself to put on a flawless performance in order to display her true skills to the judges. All of a sudden, her greatest anticipation has been answered… ZetaPro has been placed in the same block as NAZO. Kagura appears before Nozomi with the other two members of NAZO. Kagura is surprised Nozomi was able to maintain her unit’s success up to this point. Now she wants to prove the difference in their strength once and for all. Nozomi urges her partners to step up their game and not make even the slightest mistake. She is also counting on Kenji to make sure to time their appeals perfectly in order to show up NAZO’s. Kenji claims he will try his hardest, but is a little concerned Nozomi will push herself and the others too hard just for the sake of defeating Kagura. Much to Kagura’s surprise, ZetaPro is able to pass by landing second place. However, much to Nozomi’s chagrin, NAZO tops her unit’s score by a huge margin. Even though Nozomi passed the audition and will move on to the next leg of the IU, she still feels as though she failed. According to her, the reason why they still cannot perform at NAZO’s level is because her partners still lack professionalism. She feels as though she has to drag the others by their feet as she progresses. In short, they are the weak links in the chain. Kagura cannot help but laugh at Nozomi’s beliefs. To her, it really was pure luck that led to ZetaPro’s recent success. In reality, the chain’s weakest link is not her partners nor is it her producer…it is Nozomi herself. She thinks she knows everything. She feels like she is the show. She believes her musical skill and experience alone are enough to give her unit strength. When she leads, everything has to be her way in order to succeed. She expects and pushes her partners to perform at her level, disregarding the immense gap in their abilities. This is why Nozomi truly is a terrible leader who only serves to hold the unit back. If she keeps leading her unit this way, their success will eventually come crashing down hard. Kagura finds it surprising her partners haven’t considered quitting after the harsh treatment she has given them. As she leaves, she tells Nozomi she will never lose to someone like. Nozomi is devastated. She thought there was no way she could have been the weak link to the unit, but then starts to believe what Kagura told her was in fact true. Kenji tries to help, but Nozomi is anything but in the mood to talk. On the drive back, Nozomi tries her best to hold back her crying, but her tears become very apparent.

Back at the office, Nozomi apologizes profusely to everyone for letting them down. She could not believe she was acting so selfish. She thought what she was doing was contributing to the well-being of the group, but in reality she didn’t seem to care about anyone’s thoughts and feelings but her own. All this time Nozomi felt as though she had to live up to her past success as a singer and a leader. She felt like she had to perform flawlessly during each recording and concert in order to prove herself worthy to be enrolled in a conservatory. Then she completely forgot about Kenji’s advice even after their little private chat. Nozomi feels doubtful her partners, Kenji, and the President can forgive her after what she has done. Kenji and the others do forgive her. They know she was trying her very best and had no bad intentions whatsoever. Kenji believes the real problem was not that she set the bar too high for him and the other idols, but that she set her own bar too high. The talent gap between Nozomi and her partners is immense. The way Nozomi practices, if the other two take one step forward, Nozomi takes three. Kenji suggests maybe she should adjust to her partners’ levels rather than ask them to adjust to her level. This way she will not put so much of a burden on herself. If all three of them perform on the same scale, they will flow together perfectly and become that much better. She could consider Nozomi’s idol trio similar to her choir and class assignment groups. All groups function strongly when they work together as one. Her partners still view her as a fantastic leader despite the mistakes she has made. As for those conservatories, Nozomi should not worry about performing a song to the point. People like them usually don’t care about perfection. What they do look for is dedication. Show that you have been practicing hard and that you care about the song and the message it conveys. If you show passion in your work, your audience will feel that same passion. Kenji then adds one more suggestion. Being an idol may be Nozomi’s job, but it should be fun for her. Since she has dedicated nearly her entire life to music, why not get some enjoyment out of what she loves? Besides, that could help take a big load off her shoulders. Nozomi promises to try her best to make the necessary adjustments to make her and her unit that much better.

Nozomi decides to spend some time with her partners in order to study and adapt to their lifestyles as well as their practicing methods. This allows her to bond with her new friends and feel much more relaxed. While she still practices on her own as diligently as before, she is much calmer and more focused on getting the job done rather than stressing herself out with fixing every little detail. She still seems to find even the slightest flaw, but does not seem to worry about it unless the mistake is constant or critical.

On the day ZetaPro receives a writ of challenge from NAZO to face off at the Harvest Moon Festival, Nozomi feels ready to take them on this time around. She can already feel the improvement she has made since the IU prelims. At the festival, Kenji notices that Nozomi seems to be performing at a level on par with Kagura. Unfortunately, their performances are cut short due to a pyrotechnic malfunction. As Yamato appears to pick up NAZO, he passes by ZetaPro and proceeds to mock them. To Yamato, the only way a singer of Nozomi’s caliber could have joined up with a run-down company run by the lower class was that she was too soft and sympathetic. It’s pretty clear that ZetaPro is using her incredible talents and gullibility to their advantage, thinking they can pay her as little as possible while fattening their own wallets under her success. That’s how common-class companies function (in Yamato’s eyes). If she really wants to be strong enough to be accepted into Juilliard, she should have contributed her talents to the upper class—the big-money names in the entertainment industry like RyuuseiPro. She could be making a lot more money and a much bigger name for herself. But, no…she had to be a weakling backed by silly dreams and try hopelessly to promote herself under the name of a smaller company where nobody will recognize her. If she keeps this up, she will never have what it takes to be accepted into a conservatory. Nozomi stands up to him, claiming he is only telling lies. She can tell everyone at ZetaPro really does care about her, especially Kenji, who helped her see the importance of using her talents to bring joy to her fans as well as herself. Even if she does not wind up studying in a conservatory for her efforts, all of the memories of her idol career are just too precious for her to let go. Yamato laughs at Nozomi’s logic, claiming she really is way too soft for her own good and hoping she enjoys her fifteen minutes of fame. He laughs as he heads back to his limo with the rest of NAZO.

(to be continued)

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Re: The Portal of Zeta: iDOLM@STER Neo Vision
« Reply #235 on: August 16, 2014, 04:24:40 am »
As I draw Nozomi's route to a close, I should let you know this ending will be slightly different from some of the others...

Uemura Nozomi's Route, conclusion

On the day of the IU finals opening ceremonies, Nozomi overhears a conversation between Kagura and Yamato. From what she hears, Kagura claims she must win the IU in order to maintain the legacy of her family. Knowing the rough treatment her parents gave her in the past, Yamato assures her he will do whatever it takes for NAZO to win the championship. Now Nozomi understands why Kagura also takes her idol career so seriously. Kagura does not want to lose to anybody. Sounds like someone Nozomi used to know. Nozomi decides not to interfere so both units can maintain their focus as they head into the final tournament brackets. Still, she can hardly believe how similar she is to Kagura. Both dedicate their lives to music. They are both very diligent with their practicing. They both feel as though failure is not an option. Both have ultimate goals revolving around their talents. The question now is whose ambition will come out on top?

After Namco Angel gets knocked in the quarterfinals by NAZO, Chihaya reminds everyone to keep their eyes on Nozomi’s group. It turns out Nozomi’s talents and achievements have caught the eye of one of 765Pro’s most talented idols. If there is anyone who can defeat NAZO now other than Project Fairy or Ryuuguu Komachi, it would have to be Nozomi and ZetaPro.

Yamato is feeling desperate now. He devises a last-ditch plan in order to wreck Nozomi’s performance and her shot at getting into a conservatory. The next day as Nozomi is practicing, Kaito gives her a present from her high school’s choir teacher. The present contains two pieces of candy and a letter wishing her the best of luck. Once Nozomi is finished practicing, she pops the candy into her mouth as she gets ready to change. Little does she and Kaito know that package was not from her teacher…it was a trap set up by Yamato, as the candy was meant to clog her vocal cords. All of a sudden, Nozomi’s voice begins to crack and get muddy. She then coughs. She tries to explain her situation to Kenji, but she cannot seem to talk above a whisper. Kenji is shocked. She is losing her voice! He tells her to calm down and drink some lukewarm water. Perhaps that might help. However, not wanting to fall behind and remain prepared for the performance anyway, Nozomi reads over her music a couple more times. Yamato soon gets a call from one of the stage crew members informing him what happened to Nozomi. Yamato smirks sinisterly, feeling as though his plan will succeed. With Nozomi out of the way, NAZO’s victory is pretty much guaranteed now.

As evening falls, the audience is let inside the dome, and the deadline time getting closer and closer, Nozomi is feeling a little better, but she is far from 100%, her voice is still a little quieter and muddier than usual, and still coughs quite a bit. Kaito is worried. If he allows her to perform tonight, she will likely go all out and only make matters worse for her vocal cords. It might be best if Nozomi sits this one out and the other two perform as a duet. Nozomi immediately refuses. She has already come this far and is not willing to let herself or her partners down. Her partners agree. Nozomi is a staple member of this trio. Without her exceptional singing talents and leadership skills, who knows where the unit would be today? Kenji knows Nozomi is way too determined to let something like plugged vocal cords get in her way. However, he is concerned about her safety and asks her to be careful. Just before curtain call, Nozomi decides to drink a couple of glasses of lukewarm water in order to try to clear her throat the best she can. While ZetaPro gets set up, Kaito, feeling a little reluctant, searches for the staff member who gave Nozomi the candy in order to tell him what happened.

As Nozomi and company approach the stage, they are confronted by Yamato. As Nozomi coughs and talks in a somewhat whispery voice, he laughs at Nozomi’s current condition and suggests she should drop out while she has the chance. No sense in worsening her voice by singing in a big concert. Nozomi bites back, claiming she will not let anything like this stop her from performing. Yamato mocks her, asking her to speak up as he cannot seem to hear her. He then claims Nozomi is a fool. Performing with a voice like that will only lead to her unit’s crushing defeat to NAZO. All of a sudden, Kaito shows up with the staff member that gave him Nozomi’s “gift.” It turns out he was taking orders from Yamato. That gift was meant to be a trap in order to ruin her voice in time for the performance. Once Kaito found the guy, he saw him was acting suspicious so he made the pig squeal. Kenji can hardly believe Yamato would sink so low. He and Kagura demand he cut out his dirty antics and play fair. Kagura feels a little reluctant to face Nozomi in her current condition. An underhanded victory like that might actually wind up hurting her family’s reputation. All of a sudden, as Nozomi clears her throat again, a miracle happens. Her voice is back to 100%! The extra water combined with her determination is enough to break the candy’s clutches on her vocal cords. This fires Kagura up. Now Nozomi will be able to face the full strength of NAZO with no holds barred. However, she does not intend to lose either. Nozomi plans to put all her heart, soul, and voice into this one performance. Will the conservatories be listening? Whose desire will prevail?

ENDING

One week has passed since ZetaPro’s victory at the IU finals. Nozomi’s voice is much better now. Once she arrives at the office, she wishes to speak with Kenji outside, claiming she has a bit of a surprise for him. First of all, Nozomi never expected her idol career to be such a roller coaster ride. She really has everyone to thank, especially Kenji, for helping her to grow not only as a performer but as a person in general. Her leadership skills have matured greatly, carrying over to her final high school classes as well. Plus, she learned several new skills that allow her to become much better in terms of her musical abilities too. She no longer strives for perfection—only satisfaction. While she still remains diligent in terms of her music studies, Kenji has also taught her to have fun doing what she loves most. Finally, and most important of all, she gained several new friends who cared for her very much, especially her producer. Nozomi is happy to be able to live up to her past accomplishments and become ten times the singer she was before. Now she tells Kenji the big news…Nozomi has been accepted into Juilliard! Kenji congratulates her for accomplishing her dreams. Someone like her really deserves to study there. Unfortunately, her classes start in the fall and she will have to head to New York before then. She has decided to semi-retire as an idol while she gets through her studies, but does promise to come back and hold a big performance showing everyone what she learned in Juilliard once she heads back to Japan. However, she will never forget any of her experiences as an idol. It was truly the most memorable and insightful moments in her life so far and she owes it all to Kenji. Kenji will sad to see her go so soon after such a successful career, but he wishes her the best of luck on all her future endeavors. As the book closes on one story, a new one is soon to begin…

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« Reply #236 on: August 19, 2014, 10:48:23 pm »
Eagerly looking forward to the newest idol story!

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« Reply #237 on: August 20, 2014, 06:05:52 am »
I was thinking about who to do next, but after seeing Maka's comment, I've got a bit of inspiration. The drill-haired five-year veteran is next!

Hijikata Chiyo’s Route

As Kenji selects the idol he plans to produce, he is well aware of her experience in the entertainment world. Because she really seems to know the ropes, he knows the bar will be raised a little higher than usual. Kenji just so happens to meet Chiyo on the same stone bridge where they saw each other the night after the Black Pearl Festival. Chiyo is walking back to the office after playing a round of tennis. She is a little sweaty and tired, but is far from drained as she kept herself hydrated with a bottle of water. Chiyo seems to find it more than a coincidence seeing Kenji again at the exact same spot where they had met just before making her decision to switch from 961Pro to ZetaPro. Kenji then confirms her suspicions once he tells her the news about her upcoming debut. Chiyo knew it…it must have been a stroke of fate. Still, it feels a little odd to her as she hasn’t worked with a producer for a while. She is willing to put her faith in him and hopes he does not disappoint as she starts her idol career anew.

One of Chiyo’s features that really seems to stand out to Kenji is her almost perfectly built body. She really knows how to stay fit and slender without looking anorexic. She bikes to school and work every day and spends some free mornings playing tennis. In fact, Chiyo was once a star player in her junior high school’s tennis club until her idol activities began to interfere. All this while eating three square, healthy meals. One reason she plans to keep her body in shape is because she will usually work as a model from time to time, inspired by her mother’s current job. Still, Chiyo has seen idols of many different sizes over the course of her career. She really seems to agree there is no “ideal” body size for an idol.

(to be continued)

Sorry it's a little short, but it's getting late where I am. I'll get right to the real nitty-gritty later on.
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« Reply #238 on: August 22, 2014, 01:08:33 am »
Hijikata Chiyo's Route, cont.

Even after her successful debut, Chiyo still cannot find it in her heart to trust Kenji. This worries Kenji. While he is trying his level best to make sure she’s happy, it seems as though she still remains a little cautious around him. However, after a few successful promotions and a victory in her unit’s first festival, Chiyo eventually starts warming up a little to him. Chiyo then apologizes for making Kenji unnecessarily worry about her. The only reason she felt a little distrusting and insecure around Kenji is because of bad memories of her past. Chiyo has been working as an idol for five years now. She used to wear her hair in drills similar in style to Teto Kasane. Early on in her career, she got stuck with some of the worst producers in the business. They abused her, sexually harassed her, and essentially did not give a hoot about her personal feelings. While some wound up fired, Chiyo did have to transfer production companies a few times. Later on, a couple of her other producers were a bit nicer to her, but were pretty incompetent and didn’t have much of an idea what they were doing. Needless to say, they could not live up to her standards. Even though she has earned an avid, decent-sized fanbase who continues to support her through and through, Chiyo’s career eventually slowed to a standstill with the rising popularity of the idols from 765Pro and 961Pro. After Chiyo joined 961Pro, Kuroi did not help with her view of producers at all, claiming they are all disgusting self-centered filth who only serve to hinder the progress of an idol’s career. He essentially convinced her that she does not need a producer to become the idol she always wanted to be, constantly reminding her of her earlier years in her career. However, her views seemed to change entirely once she met Kenji and ZetaPro. After his unit defeated hers at the Black Pearl Festival, he stood up for her feelings after Kuroi scolded her severely. It was not often at all that Chiyo saw this much potential in such a young producer. Kenji’s idols really appreciated his kindness, he really seemed to know what he was doing, and he possessed the skill and heart to defeat a unit from such a big name in the idol industry. That combined with Kuroi’s lies and abusiveness led Chiyo to defect from 961Pro and join ZetaPro. After Chiyo’s little flashback, Kenji understands. He tells Chiyo she didn’t really have to apologize in the first place for lacking faith in her new producer especially after all she has been through. Still, he promises to take good care of her and live up to her high expectations as he guides her on a path much more successful than before.

Chiyo is eager to perform in the Sunny Beach Festival. She has performed there before and knows how it attracts a few big-name idols. If her unit can perform well there, they will be well on their way to a huge jump in popularity. However, once Chiyo gets there, catching a glimpse of her suddenly-changed opponent sends chills down her spine. She tries to shake it off and put on the best performance she can, but her unit is singlehandedly slaughtered by Kagura. Kagura recognizes her opponent immediately. No wonder she was able to defeat her so easily. According to Kagura, “Chiyobaa-san” is way out of her prime, over-the-hill for an idol, and is nothing more than a has-been. It is a complete shocker she hasn’t even considered retiring yet. Kagura tells Chiyo to face facts—her career is soon coming to a crashing halt and there is nothing she can do to stop it, especially with her “true intentions” standing in the way. As Kagura confidently leaves, Kenji wonders what Kagura means by Chiyo’s “true intentions,” but believes it’s something personal and decides to keep it to himself.

Back at the office, Chiyo reveals that she had to deal with NAZO in the past. When she was still with 961Pro, NAZO challenged and utterly destroyed them in a festival performance. Their producer proceeded to torment Kuroi, mocking his company’s so-called “legendary” reputation and even calling him a has-been. Kuroi was beyond frustrated but surprisingly, despite his policies, he didn’t wind up firing his unit, calling it sheer dumb idiot luck to lose to the new idol super-sensation. Chiyo is a still a little upset from the earlier festival. Kenji and her partners apologize, believing she is blaming them for their loss to Kagura. However, Chiyo claims there is no one to blame. She knows NAZO’s power and popularity are for real, especially seeing that they are capable of making short work out of one of the biggest idol companies in the business. Plus, the way Kagura mocked her was just salt to the wound. Sure Chiyo is a little older than most idols these days, her career was far from memorable, and her recent defeat was humiliating, but that will not stop her. The only way her unit can go from here is forward. Kenji admires Chiyo’s optimism, but he can almost seem to tell from her eyes that she is hiding something. Why does she want to reach the top so bad? Is there more to her intentions than meets the eye? Kenji and the unit part ways for the night filled with so many questions about their veteran idol.

(to be continued)
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Re: The Portal of Zeta: iDOLM@STER Neo Vision
« Reply #239 on: August 23, 2014, 06:56:35 am »
Dang, 5k+ views on this thread?! I honestly never thought I'd hit that landmark! Thank you all for your continued support of my idol project!

Hijikata Chiyo's Route, cont.

Kagura is seen talking with her mysterious producer (you know who). She is well familiar with her recent opponent’s history. It’s pretty much safe to say her unit is no longer a threat.

Meanwhile, around roughly the same time, Chiyo is seen talking with another mysterious young man. This man seems aware of NAZO’s recent success, but never figured Chiyo would have to face them again so soon. Chiyo is worried. If Kagura continues to interfere, it will become nigh impossible to fulfull the promise she made to him…

Chiyo’s unit manages to get its groove going again after a couple of successful outings. However, Kenji notices that Chiyo is still looking a little concerned…not about him or her unit, but something else. A few days after ZetaPro’s victory over Ryuuguu Komachi at the Fujisan Rock Festival, Kenji notices Chiyo in disguise going on an outing with a strapping young man (who is actually the same guy we see Chiyo talking with the night after the Sunny Beach Festival). Kenji walks up to Chiyo and says hello, which gives her quite a shock. Kenji knows all his idols well enough that not even the most convincing disguises can fool him. Still not wanting her cover to get blown, Chiyo decides to return to her apartment so the three of them can chat in private. Once there, the young man introduces himself as Takuma Iwamoto. It turns out he has been dating Chiyo for the last two years. Takuma and Chiyo actually knew each other since their third year of junior high, but it wasn’t until Chiyo’s idol career began to soar that they began to notice each other. Takuma turned into one of her most avid fans even during the times she had to deal with several stumbling blocks. As time flew by, Chiyo and Takuma were soon pit in the same classes and were often paired up during group assignments. She could soon tell he was something more than just a fan. Eventually their relationship grew more romantic, hitting its peak just before graduating high school. As Takuma and Chiyo began dating, she noticed something shocking on the front page of a popular idol magazine. A center idol in a big-time unit had recently been fired from her company after some of her peers caught her on a date with a guy. According to the magazine, this company has guidelines that strictly forbid romantic relationships among their idols. The unfortunate idol’s career was a shambles as all her once-loyal fans immediately turned the other cheek. Some were even recently seen breaking her albums with a hammer in protest of her actions. Chiyo was so disturbed. Did she make a mistake by deepening her friendship with Takuma? As she informed her current company of the situation (this company’s guidelines do not forbid relationships), her president told her it has something to do with purity. Idols are meant to save their love for only their fans. Fans and larger companies expect their idols to retain their innocence. Chiyo felt so conflicted. Staying with Takuma might destroy her career, but she loves him too much just to let him go like that. She decided to keep him a secret from the public and disguises herself during dates with him. Luckily, her relationship remained unnoticed. After Takuma was informed of Chiyo’s situation, he is not willing to give up on her at all. To the public eye, he will remain a normal everyday fan of hers. They even decide to go to separate colleges in order to prevent any suspicions. Chiyo decides to make a promise to him. Once she becomes a top idol, she will be able to retire so they can safely be together forever. End flashback. This promise Chiyo made to Takuma is the reason why she is so determined to reach the top no matter what. This is why she is counting on Kenji to help her. Takuma tells Kenji he has heard good things about him from Chiyo. While Kenji is a lot younger, he certainly is a lot more capable than pretty much every other producer Chiyo had to put up with over the years. He certainly treats his idols with the utmost respect. Takuma can see why she trusts her new producer so much. Kenji informs both Chiyo and Takuma he will do his best to help them fulfill their promise. With a quick goodbye, Kenji leaves and heads home.

Weeks go by and word of Chiyo’s relationship still has not reached the public. Not even Yamato’s spies have managed to discover them together. When the President suggests that Chiyo’s unit try out for the IU to test their skills, Chiyo demands they enter. It would become a major step forward in the path towards reaching the status of top idols. Kenji knows why she really wants to take this opportunity, but decides to keep it a secret from everyone else. On the day of the IU preliminaries, Chiyo feels eager to return to a venue filled with so many painful memories and crushed dreams. Every time she tried out for the IU in the past, she failed. Not only was she held back by incompetent producers, but bigger companies including 765Pro’s idols proved to be too much for her. This time, things are different to Chiyo. With similar dreams, but different idols and a much more capable producer, she feels confident she can go the distance this time around. However, things get tense when ZetaPro winds up placed in the same competition block as NAZO. Kagura arrives with the rest of her unit. Believing Chiyo has not learned her lesson since the Sunny Beach Festival, perhaps getting crushed by NAZO’s full power will be enough to teach Chiyo she is no longer fit to be an idol. If she tried and failed to get into the IU several times before, what makes her think she has a chance this time around? It will just be the same old story. Chiyo is not swayed by Kagura’s taunts, believing she really does have what it takes this time around. Much to Kagura’s surprise, ZetaPro manages to pass. However, they still place a far distant second to NAZO. Kagura claims Chiyo’s success was nothing more than a stroke of luck. Her fans are fools to still believe in an idol who continuously could not get her career anywhere. Compared to most of today’s younger idols, Chiyo is pretty over the hill. Plus, Kenji will only serve to hinder her progress just like her other producers. Then there are her partners. Kagura believes Chiyo is a coward trying to rely on the help of younger talent to help her achieve success. Chiyo is just scared because she could not get the job done on her own. Kagura does not plan to lose to the likes of a veteran no matter how successful (or lucky) she turns out to be. She claims she will find a way to put Chiyo’s career to an end once and for all. Feeling a little frustrated, she leaves the venue with her two partners. Chiyo really took Kagura’s agonizing threats like a boss. Perhaps it was her poker face that really disturbed Kagura. Still, Chiyo is proud and thankful for everyone at ZetaPro for helping her finally pass the IU preliminaries. However, she knows this is only the beginning.

(to be continued)
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