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The Portal of Zeta: iDOLM@STER Neo Vision

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Amazing_Grace:
Out of the ones you have totally planned out, I really like Mai, Yoshino, and Setsuna in particular (let's be honest here, especially Setsuna because Eri Kitamura), but I'm excited to see what you come up with for each and every one of them. Are you looking for suggestions on which girls to do, or suggestions on how the stories for the ones you don't know will go?

ZetaFlare:

--- Quote from: Amazing_Grace on April 06, 2014, 05:17:14 pm ---Are you looking for suggestions on which girls to do, or suggestions on how the stories for the ones you don't know will go?

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Sort of both, but moreso on the bolded topic.

Especially Hotaru. I know I wanted Hotaru to be forced into the idol industry by her parents in order for her to overcome her laziness and break out the full potential of her musical talent, but I'm kind of stuck on giving her events that will eventually get her head in the game, especially when the IU rolls around. However,  I think I have a pretty good idea of how I want Yamato to completely mess with her head before the IU finals. For one of her better endings, though, she decides to stay in Honshu and continue her idol career (thanks to Kenji's inspiration) despite an OK from her parents to return home.

Shiori is going to be tough. I'm glad people like her...being the emotionless, silent type prone for art and poetry wishing to get in touch with a more "modern" form of art, but I'm just drawing a blank for her story (I know I want her to smile for the first time during one of her better endings). Same with Emi.

Amazing_Grace:

--- Quote from: ZetaFlare on April 06, 2014, 05:52:00 pm --- I know I wanted Hotaru to be forced into the idol industry by her parents in order for her to overcome her laziness and break out the full potential of her musical talent, but I'm kind of stuck on giving her events that will eventually get her head in the game, especially when the IU rolls around. However,  I think I have a pretty good idea of how I want Yamato to completely mess with her head before the IU finals. For one of her better endings, though, she decides to stay in Honshu and continue her idol career (thanks to Kenji's inspiration) despite an OK from her parents to return home.

Shiori is going to be tough. I'm glad people like her...being the emotionless, silent type prone for art and poetry wishing to get in touch with a more "modern" form of art, but I'm just drawing a blank for her story (I know I want her to smile for the first time during one of her better endings). Same with Emi.

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Hmm...I'll definitely be thinking. If I can think of anything, I'll let you know and see what you think!
It might take a while since I've found I have problems with thinking of...stuff. XD But I'll certainly try to help in any way I can. :D

ZetaFlare:
Thanks Grace! Any help is greatly appreciated! I added Ryoko and Tamaki to the "her story is up in the air" list too, though I may get Tamaki's father involved in her path.

ZetaFlare:
I decided to run through Sakura's path first seeing how she's the main character.

Shiranui Sakura’s Route

It has always been Sakura’s dream to become a pro singer. Even since her elementary school days, she would go to the park often to listen to Haruka (her biggest inspiration) sing. Sakura found the break she was looking for after she was scouted by President Ryuuzaki upon her winning performance (alongside Kenji and Asuka) at a Yokohama mall’s talent competition. Now she can live out her dream.

Kenji sees a familiar face among ZetaPro’s list of idol candidates and decides to produce his best friend. As he goes to the nearby park’s fountain to see her, Sakura thinks he just came over to say hi, but he gives her the news. Sakura is both surprised and excited…not only has her debut been decided so soon, but her childhood friend is going to manage her career! She promises to always be by Kenji’s side and give him her full support no matter what the challenges they face.

As a seasoned performer, Sakura already has an avid fan base among her schoolmates. As she grows more popular, the whole school knows her name. Everyone seems to treat her like a local superstar. While she does have to wade through the occasional otaku fanboys/autographs/love confessions, Sakura really does enjoy her popularity…not because the spotlight was on her, but because she’s making everyone who sees her or listens to her songs happy. That’s all she really ever wanted.

However, as NAZO starts to interfere with ZetaPro, everything changes. During the Sunny Beach Festival, Sakura senses an air of familiarity with her opponent. After her unit loses singlehandedly, she immediately recognizes the girl who defeated her—Kagura Ichimonji. Kagura believes Sakura is the big reason why her unit is so weak. In fact, she’s surprised that someone as “carefree” and “unfocused” as Sakura even had the thought about being an idol in the first place. She never takes anything seriously and is a burden to the whole unit.

Back at the office, everyone notices that Sakura is really down in the dumps. She believes what Kagura said is true and blames herself for ZetaPro’s loss. The truth is Sakura knew Kagura ever since they were in middle school choir. Sakura could tell Kagura had that natural talent. If she took one step forward, Kagura would take two or even three. While Sakura is amazed by Kagura’s performances, Kagura is disgusted by Sakura’s. She would always tell Sakura that if she only sings because she has fun doing it, she will never reach her level and would only be a burden on herself and her fellow singers, who all take their classes and training very seriously. Even if the teacher would pair the two of them up for a performance, Kagura would always refuse because of her morals. Kenji tries to cheer her up, but Sakura isn’t in the mood to talk and takes off.

As the days go by, Kenji begins to notice that Sakura has been acting a little unusual. She doesn’t often talk to Kenji after school, claiming she’s really busy. It almost seems as if she’s using her normally outgoing personality to hide her recent troubles. One day, as the unit is practicing for an upcoming festival, Sakura urges her partners to extend the lesson. Claiming there are still a few kinks to work out, she won’t let them go until they can run through their song and choreography flawlessly. However, it’s beyond closing time and her partners are feeling a little exhausted. Kenji can either choose to extend the lesson for a few more minutes (causing Sakura’s tension to rise while the other idols lose a bit) or urge Sakura to end the lesson (causing Sakura’s tension to drop while the others gain a bit). Regardless of the outcome, Kenji makes it a priority to see what’s wrong with Sakura…

(to be continued)
Haruka will be involved in the story later on, so stay tuned!

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