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Yui:

--- Quote from: Bro on February 03, 2013, 11:16:47 pm ---No, no! Definitely my fault. I completely forgot specifying that. Sorry.

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Nah, it's ok. Anyway... I looked for some model (yeah, I don't know that break dance), so... it's like this?

Bro:
Yeah, the pose is fine! I'm not real particular, especially when someone is generous to do the art for free!

As much as I don't like criticizing free things either... The anatomy looks a little off, if you're trying to draw what I think you're trying to draw. (A six-step? If you know what that is, I mean.)

That part of the six-step, if that's the idea, should have the feet flipped up. As in, the toes pointing skyward. The legs should also be a bit longer. Actually, it doesn't really matter what pose you're drawing, it looks pretty good so far other than the upside down feet and shorter legs. I mean, if you want me to better explain a possible position and the anatomy, I could- but I'd feel like I was talking down to you about it! x[
Or either of these but with Hibiki:



Or really anything you've just seen online, if the anatomy or perspective is tightened up a bit! (Again, sorry! I feel really bad almost lecturing you like that or anything, but I'm really grateful!

Yui:
Sorry for taking so long, masters.

@Bro



No need apologize. I didn't saw any problem in pointing my mistakes and saying where I have to change. Well, It's not like I'm some professional. Anyway, with this... I can change, improve my skills and then make even better. And in the end, everyone's satisfied. So... thanks for the hint.

Anyway... I have to admit. Drawing someone dancing like this was a challenge for me. I had to use what the people call "skeleton". Updating status...



@Sunflorazumarill

I just finished yours, master. ^_^

Bro:

--- Quote from: Yui on February 10, 2013, 06:48:15 am ---


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WAHHH
IT'S PERFECT, IT'S AMAZING

THAT'S ONE OF MY FAVORITE POSES TOO! WONDERFUL!

One minor thing, could you make her right hand flashing the V/peace sign?

I LOVE IT SO MUCH THOUGH!

Yui:

--- Quote from: Bro on February 10, 2013, 07:07:51 am ---
WAHHH
IT'S PERFECT, IT'S AMAZING

THAT'S ONE OF MY FAVORITE POSES TOO! WONDERFUL!

One minor thing, could you make her right hand flashing the V/peace sign?

I LOVE IT SO MUCH THOUGH!

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Oops... forgot to mention. I already used the pen to lineart. Haha...
But... good thing that you liked that version. ^_^

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