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Re: Takane Shijou - Lunar ancestry
« Reply #210 on: January 25, 2011, 12:21:34 am »
It's a really nice story, I enjoyed it.
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Re: Takane Shijou - Lunar ancestry
« Reply #211 on: January 25, 2011, 05:57:00 am »
Post number 961 for you, Marx. How fitting. ^^;

OSHI- So it is. *runs off to find a random post I made that I can delete, so the B-day story becomes my 960th, and the Jupiter comment my 961st*

Anyway, glad you liked it guys.

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Talking about Takane again, I kinda like to ask: Where (or when) was it said that she doesn't want to be alone in SP? I probably missed it when we talked about it, but I wanna ask for formality's sake.

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Re: Takane Shijou - Lunar ancestry
« Reply #212 on: January 25, 2011, 06:02:49 am »
OSHI- So it is. *runs off to find a random post I made that I can delete, so the B-day story becomes my 960th, and the Jupiter comment my 961st*

Anyway, glad you liked it guys.
Heh, nice story and post placement. ::)

And I have no clue about the Takane thing...

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Re: Takane Shijou - Lunar ancestry
« Reply #213 on: January 25, 2011, 06:25:34 am »
Talking about Takane again, I kinda like to ask: Where (or when) was it said that she doesn't want to be alone in SP? I probably missed it when we talked about it, but I wanna ask for formality's sake.


(If you're talking about the game, I'm not sure.)
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Re: Takane Shijou - Lunar ancestry
« Reply #214 on: January 25, 2011, 06:38:46 am »
Yeah, I was. (Sorry. My mind sometimes work mysteriously)

Anyway, I'll just wait until someone does come with an answer.

Oh, and I finally deleted a post so the birthday story's no longer my 961st!

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Re: Takane Shijou - Lunar ancestry
« Reply #215 on: January 25, 2011, 06:57:20 am »
Its a good story.

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Re: Takane Shijou - Lunar ancestry
« Reply #216 on: January 25, 2011, 08:31:20 am »
I think towards the end of SP, at Rank B or something... that's when all the pressure starts building up. Kuroi likes to isolate his idols, right? I think it went something along those lines, and she may've said that being alone's too much or something.

I turned to Yukiho for this one, she said we should leave her alone, so we did.

Points of constructive criticism, though: I noticed your tenses switched from present to past and back quite often, and they might be better off being all in the past or all in the present (people speaking is another matter, and I personally am partial to past tense). Sometimes you can convey inner thoughts and emotions through body language as well, rather than stating it outright. Also, I think a new paragraph is usually started when speakers change, but I don't know where I got that impression. (Probably heard that a long time ago.)
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Re: Takane Shijou - Lunar ancestry
« Reply #217 on: February 07, 2011, 04:20:41 am »


Don't know if this is a repost, but I randomly found this and thought I should share Takane's funky dance with you guys.

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Re: Takane Shijou - Lunar ancestry
« Reply #218 on: February 07, 2011, 04:22:51 am »
I think somebody used to have that one as their avatar XD
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Re: Takane Shijou - Lunar ancestry
« Reply #219 on: February 07, 2011, 05:07:51 am »


Don't know if this is a repost, but I randomly found this and thought I should share Takane's funky dance with you guys.
It's still cute.
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Re: Takane Shijou - Lunar ancestry
« Reply #220 on: May 02, 2011, 05:40:38 am »
Revival of picture posting!  8)


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Re: Takane Shijou - Lunar ancestry
« Reply #221 on: September 15, 2011, 07:07:25 am »



HAHA. This gif.

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Re: Takane Shijou - Lunar ancestry
« Reply #222 on: September 15, 2011, 09:18:06 am »
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Re: Takane Shijou - Lunar ancestry
« Reply #223 on: December 07, 2011, 04:23:26 am »
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Re: Takane Shijou - Lunar ancestry
« Reply #224 on: January 05, 2012, 03:52:34 pm »
It's maybe silly question.
Did takane say in end of Wondering Star that she must collected money to build space ship to back to the moon ?
I can't find the prove as picture or video clip. please help me to confirm it.