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Heattokun:
While most would say these are cute,i'm going to give a bit of criticism. But dont worry, this isnt the "OMG U SUK GET OFF TH NET" sort of criticism but more of a "heres a way to improve" sort of thing.
Study up on how torsos look. Your torsos kinda look like two triangles stacked on eachother  resulting in an extremely eerie looking waistline that  is about as thick as their neck.
What i reccomend is to try a more thicker approach on your next work. So you dont get something like this:
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but more something like:
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/  \
though,while im at it, i might as well add you shouldnt make the lines on the torsos so extreme. Keep in mind that girls are curvy! Curvy!!
Mens shapes are more triangles and squares when it comes to cartoons, So instead of aiming for a pointy torso try to make the edges more circular,so my example above would be more like:
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\       /
 )    (
/      \

Just remember this about art:
Practice makes perfect
Dont trace(your good on this but dont trace in the future - just saying)
and you can do it!
Getting better is all about getting outside of your comfort zone...and I feel that you have potential!
Good luck!

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