Magic TV show, make my fan thread grooooooooow!!!!
There's a stream of this, though? News to me.
Personally, I thought that lyric you made was good. It's singable with no issues in my opinion. It seems your issues with English adaptations are very subtle and something I can't relate to or understand that well. I suppose that's that then, but I really saw nothing wrong with that line adaptation you made! (:
Honestly that was one of the lines I was more happy with, but I thought it would illustrate what I meant. I think it's otherwise fine (I think), and I'm not embarrassed to sing it, it's just I think it could be stand to be more fluid there. Some parts of that translation, though... I know why I did what I did, but again, things still bug me. Thanks for the compliment, though.
So, once again, I think I'll ask... Atsushi Nishigori. Has he gone to Otakon like, ever?